[fic] Kyo/Die - Dir en grey - The End of Everything - Oneshot

[rabenhorst]

Title: The End of Everything
Author: fonulyn
Rating: R? death and language
Pairing: Kyo/Die
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: Kyo always thought that apocalypse meant noise; explosions, war, screams, guns, crying, echoes, frantic sounds of all life forms trying to ensure their survival.
WARNING: Character death.

Comments

[seinen_no]

Oh gosh, this was now... a shock? I liked it but it made me very sad.

[fonulyn]

Well it's the apocalypse, it can hardly be sunshine and flowers, can it? XD

[seinen_no]

Haha, I don't know if it could've been sunshine and flowers *laughs* This just really made me so sad... It was beautiful, don't get me wrong and I liked it, but it's still sad.

[fonulyn]

Then I did something right since it was supposed to be sad :) It got me kinda sad at least. Thanks :)

[ansekishoku]

Wow, I liked it 8D
Even the red sky (red sky with zombies! :D) and all the scenario. At the beginning I thought Die was already dead, so it was a surprise to find him alive, though he was suffering (;_; poor thing *pets him*). I kinda... knew Kyo was going to kill himself after shooting Die.

I thought about the others... being zombified XD (cracking up, sorry lol)

Very nice work! ^^

[fonulyn]

Thank you! I'm really glad that you did! :3 It was such a ...weird one that I wasn't sure if it'd hit off that well XD haha and you know, I actually wasn't going to kill Kyo first, I was gonna let him live and angst on but ...somehow the Romeo&Juliet type of ending lured me in XD

...actually that IS a very amusing thought *laughs* One could make it a very weird, funny kind of a zombie-fic too x)

Thanks again! :)

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[byoutekinaeiyuu]

OMG that was really amazing!!! It's soo way better then what I had in mind (I mean the mine poor attempt in zombie fic-ing), only somehow sad ;) but it's apocalypse, righ? ;)

I loved the moment Kyo enter the shack and the description of Die, his legs, the bits... The dirt and Kyo's shoes... soo angsty.

It deserves a better comment but I'm so braindead and a zombie myself now... -_-"

also: so if it’s weird, it’s because of all the solvent and acid fumes

ILU ♥ xB

and I feel so inspired now, I must help Toshiya save Die, right? ;) only I'm braindead so it might kind of not work...

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[fonulyn]

Oh gosh you have no idea how relieved I am that you like it, haha! I wasn't sure if it was anything close to what it was supposed to be x) And shush, I'm sure your zombie-fic is amazing, don't even try to say otherwise!

I'm not used to writing angst really since I usually avoid it but... one has to start somewhere XD Thank you so much! ♥

haha and tomorrow I go back to lab again for the solvents and acids so let's see what kind of ideas hit then XD ♥♥

OH YES YOU DO. Toshiya can always save Die 8D Inspired is goooooooood~!

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[byoutekinaeiyuu]

Relived? Supposed to be? I feel like a really horrible person right now...

Good luck with your lab!

Ok, ok... Actually I think I must be somehow rested a bit by now, I had such a good day yesterday, but today, even though braindead, writing ff is still going better then in past like month! It's such a pity I need to get back to work, actually I should have been working whole weekend and I did so little... ;_; I want some vacations when I don't actually have to do anything :(

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[fonulyn]

Oh no no, not like that! I just wasn't sure if it was how you meant it to be and yeah XD Nevermind me! ♥

I know what you mean! :( I need vacation too and usually the most when there's not even that much to do.

[fonulyn]

Aw thank you! I'm really really glad you liked it! It's quite different from what I usually write, so I wasn't that sure about it XD But it's good to know it turned out well! And you're right, they are indeed rare...