[fic] Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi - SJM - The Path Untraveled - Chapter 8/9

[rabenhorst]

Title: The Path Untraveled
Author: fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi
Other characters: side!Han Geng/Heechul, Ryeowook, Sungmin, Siwon, a lot of brief mentions of others (suju and shinee, mainly)
Warnings: (overall) blood and violence, hunting etc.
Wordcount: 4366 words for this part (~37k overall)
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty

Comments

[shineekitten]

wfaedsgrfhtfgdfsvdc cliffhangers, they were once my friend.... and now they are my enemy >( but i will endure, because i know you will make up for it~

but anyways... OMFG THEY DID THE DOOOOOO i actually wasnt sure if you would have it happen or go into detail? idk why i thought that but it certainly made this a surprise~ a very pleasant one~. efrgftfhgbfvds they're so cute like seriously i love these two so so much fergtgbffedgrftgn and the "mine" i LOVE that it's so possessive but not in a bad way? like idek how to describe it i just love it uwu

now this cliffhanger... how /dare/ you.

(happy new year~!!!!! :DDDDD)

[fonulyn]

ahaha how does it feel being on that side of the cliffhanger? XD I do hope the last chapter will be worth it! I'm going to try to post it today, idk when I manage but as soon as I caaaan. I'm not quite sure if I have to take mom shopping or not so let's see. (whoa rambling /shuts up)

honestly, I wasn't sure about the scene either at first! I debated up until the moment I posted this whether I should include the scene or not. but in the end, it felt like it lacked something without it so I left it in. it was one of the very first scenes I actually wrote for this x)

ansjkdfgn I'm so glad you enjoyed it tho! so very glad ;;;;

happy new year once more! ♥

[shineekitten]

its awful ;n; i hate it... but thats not gonna stop me from using them as i wish in my own fics~ >). hahah its okay~ whenever you're able :)

ahhh the first scene written for a fic is usually the most important~ i can see why you kept it in (though also debated whether you shouldnt). it was really so heartfelt though. it put their feelings (that we can all kinda sense even if they hadnt been said directly) into something tangible in a way. idk. n obvs its not just sex, it's so much more and you really expressed that perfectly~

and on another note: IM GONNA DIE WHEN THE LAST CHAPTER IS POSTED CRIES I ENJOYED GETTING UPDATES ON THIS SO MUCH IM GONNA MISS IT!!!! BUT I WILL ALSO ENJOY THE ENDING AND LAUGH OR CRY OR WHATEVER DEPENDING ON WAHT YOU DECIDE TO PUT ME THROUGH.... :)

[fonulyn]

haha I feel you XD I'm bad at writing chaptered fics in general but cliffhangers can be fun~~ just posted the last chap tho :D

I'm so happy to hear that ;;♥ just, thank you again!

awhhh bbyyyy I am also sorta torn, idk, I'm SO RELIEVED that this is over and that it's all done, but at the same time I'm so sad because I don't wanna let it go ;; (I am sorta planning on a sequel tbh but since it took me three years to write this idk if I'll manage to finish that one ever lmao)

[fonulyn]

awh I'm so happy to hear that you're enjoying thisss! ♥ I really wanted to write a sort of an easy transitioning into a romance, idk, so it's good to know it's flowing well :D

thank you for reading and commenting!!♥ more shall follow soon!

[fonulyn]

I am really happy about that!! thank you :D

just posted the last part! :3

[lyn_seven]

jgfutghfjhfxfy
Ca,e back from a new yeas party tp THIS ahhhhhhh this os the best! I love tease! Mi and top! Kyu
And the titans are coming? Dx
And happy new year!

[fonulyn]

I'm so happy to hear you liked! :D haha and sounds like you had a fun party, too! Thank you so much for your comment ♥ and happy new year to you!

[anonymous]

Happy New Year? Really?

You are evil, leaving us waiting like this!! XDD

But not so because that chapter is pure love. QMi and their little escapade in the lake. They did it! But they not only had sex, it was mating and claiming and the start of a bond. I don't think it would be possible for Zhou Mi to leave without looking back now.

But before they can think about their own problem, one even bigger is here. Who are there? Will they attack? Will anyone get hurt?

OMG I can't wait!!!

Thanks for torturing us and happy new year!

Eva

[fonulyn]

haha aw I'm so sorry for the evil-ness! XD I hope the last chapter will make it up for that at least :3 just posted it (and linked you on twitter!)

you're right, now there's no way they could separate without always remembering it and regretting it. let's see what'll come to pass, tho, I'm not going to spoil the last chapter before you read it, haha!

thank you, as always, sweetie ♥♥♥

[oldroadtoavalon]

LOOK WHO'S UP TO DATE!!!
weoiejikfoerkjforejfie a bit late on everything else but i'm finally here
to watch
qmi
get it on
*wriggles eyebrows intensely*

i love this ;_; it's hard not to love what you write but the setting, the pacing, the urgency, the way zhou mi changes here--he suddenly flirts more and doesn't hesitate on teasing kyuhyun--everything is so on point, it comes together very beautifully. zhou mi knows what he wants and kyuhyun does too, so he meets it head on. and i know i've said this so many times but THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE TOUCHES IN GENERAL. AFFECTION. fuck, the breaths and how they see each other in the middle of it and the frantic need to be closer. i don't even know how to express myself. it's so perfect they join in more than one way.

but it also means they're going to lose much more than they imagined.

DON'T LET IT HAPPEN, JOJO ;________; don't let the shadow people destroy something so rare ;___________;

thank you for updating <3

[fonulyn]

LOOK WHO'S UP TO DATE!!!
so proud of you bb!♥

THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE TOUCHES IN GENERAL. AFFECTION. fuck, the breaths and how they see each other in the middle of it and the frantic need to be closer. i don't even know how to express myself. it's so perfect they join in more than one way.
asdfjghb cries at you (again) thank you ;; you're so kind to me ok, every time you leave a comment you leave me feeling all flustered and not knowing what to even do!♥

but it also means they're going to lose much more than they imagined.
true dat :<

thank you for commenting bb!!!♥ just posted the last chappie, so that's it, for now :D