[fic] Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi - SJM - The Path Untraveled - Chapter 7/9

[rabenhorst]

Title: The Path Untraveled
Author: fonulyn
Rating: NC17? (overall)
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi
Other characters: side!Han Geng/Heechul, Ryeowook, Sungmin, Siwon, a lot of brief mentions of others (suju and shinee, mainly)
Warnings: (overall) blood and violence, hunting etc.
Wordcount: 3349 words for this part (~37k overall)
Disclaimer: I own no one,

Comments

[lyn_seven]

Ahhhh SO MUCH ANTICIPATION! Looking forward to it! But I'll miss this fic when it ends :(
Merry Christmas!

[fonulyn]

Awh I'll sorta miss it too :( But at the same time I'm so glad it's done, because I've been working on it for so long :D

Merry Christmas to you too!!

[shineekitten]

so so so in love with this fic seriously i cant even describe how much i love getting each update ;u; the characters and the plot are SO interesting and ehfuwugrtgfbdvsd someone is coming for them im just dwfegrergefrgwef not good not good the suspense is gonna kill me but i will continue to wait patiently to see what happens ><~!!!

ALSO I LOVE HOW KYUHYUN AND ZHOUMI ARENT REALLY IN A RELATIONSHIP BUT THEY ARENT /NOT/ IN ONE EITHER THE SUSPENSE THERE IS ALSO KILLING ME I CANT WAIT ERGETHRYJRGNTBEFSDSFRDTFYHGDS

[fonulyn]

asdfngjkn I'm so happy that you do ;;;; it makes me feel a ton better about the fic too, idk, I was so scared about how it'd be received haha. ONLY TWO CHAPPIES TO GO wow and it feels like barely anything even happened yet lmao.

:D ♥♥

[shineekitten]

awww sweetie its okay, idk about other ppl but IM receiving it well and im enjoying it like crazy so you at least have one person who screams when you update :PPPP.

IM SO SCARED ABOUT THE 2 CHAPTERS THING DFDGSFDGFFGREHTGRF its literally like getting to the end of a book n seeing there isnt enough room for everything that needs to happen to happen, ya know?? but i will trust your judgement on your fic n i will not complain..... but i will be anxious with fingers crossed :DDDD

[fonulyn]

it's muchly appreciated ok~~

I KNOW THAT FEELING and honestly if you feel like I did something wrong with the fic you can feel free to point it out to me, I promise I won't be mad XD but I do hope the rest will be enjoyable too :D

[anonymous]

First of all I want to say I am sorry for not commenting before. I was waiting for the time to be on my laptop but days later here I am on my mobile phone XDD

Omg this chapter drove me crazy! First they were leaving and now they are staying! I loved the change and I am sure QMi will love it even more ^^

But... shadows are coming! That symbol and the permanent "unknown" threat. Drama approaching! I like the intrigue so much, this point of the story.

And of course I love QMi. How they act like a real couple not even noticing. Kyuhyun staying with Mi, refusing to run free like Mi is dying to do. They are cute, and sweet, and they don't know they won't part ways for the moment! XD

(I love how Mi always senses Gui wandering around hehehe)

Thanks, dear!

Eva

[fonulyn]

no worries sweetie! christmas time is always busy, in one way or the other, and it's totally fine ;)

I'm beyond glad you're still enjoying this! it was such a nice chapter to write, too, so seeing your reactions to it is wonderful :D

thank you for your comment ♥ I'll try to post the next chapter now, but the last one will be left for next year ;)

[oldroadtoavalon]

"Like accidentally Kyuhyun lets his hand drop next to Zhou Mi’s, and inches it closer until he can twine their fingers together. "suuuuuuuuuuuuure, """"""accidentally

[fonulyn]

my favorite thing about this chapter is that the shift in qmi's relationship becomes very obvious here.
aSDFKasdf I'm so glad it's apparent ;; I was afraid I was rushing things, but then again, it felt good to me, so I hoped, haha. I didn't wanna include any huge drama about the relationship itself, I mostly wanted just smth that had smooth transitions and all, and idk I'm rambling.

this is possibly my favorite chapter because of all the feelings and dynamics here ;_;
thank you so muchhhhh ♥♥