[fic] Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi - SJM - The Path Untraveled - Chapter 6/9

[rabenhorst]

Title: The Path Untraveled
Author: fonulyn
Rating: NC17? (overall)
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi
Other characters: side!Han Geng/Heechul, Ryeowook, Sungmin, Siwon, a lot of brief mentions of others (suju and shinee, mainly)
Warnings: (overall) blood and violence, hunting etc.
Wordcount: 5354 words for this part (~37k overall)
Disclaimer: I own no one,

Comments

[lyn_seven]

for a moment i thought the shadow people must be the titans.
maybe a bird version of the titans lol

[fonulyn]

haha who knowwwwsssss maybe we'll find out in the next part ;) thanks for reading!

[anonymous]

It's a pleasure to see how QMi relationship is developing. I love every detail you wrote. How Mi is learning aspects of living in the village, how Kyuhyun shows him his secret shelter, how the bond is growing between them step by step.

And they kissed! :DD Let me tell you how well you described the confrontation between their human part and the wolf self. How Gui lets the wolf out for a single second, kissing Mi fiercely, to go back to kissing him softly inmediatly. They are thinking too much. Their instinct has it all clear. The wolves inside them know better ^^

I love Heechul. The forever loyal Heechul, worrying about Mi, protecting him, giving him advice, ready to kill Kyuhyun if necessary. And I have the same advice: man up and go for it, Mimi! XD

Now I am intrigued... Why does Kyuhyun know that song? How is that possible?

Who are the shadow people????

I can't wait for the next chapter ^^

Thanks for posting every time I ask you too. You are indulging me ♥

Eva

[fonulyn]

I think I enjoyed writing this part the most, because of the little details and the "normal" life in the village :) It was really nice, so I'm happy that you enjoyed it too! :D

Ahhhh and I'm so so so happy that you liked the kiss too! ♥ haha you're right, the wolves do know better.

Heechul's advice is always good, right? 8)

I'll try to post the next chapter during the weekend! Poke me if I forget it :D

Thank you for reading, sweetie, as always! ♥♥

[fonulyn]

haha I'll try to update during the weekend next! :D

[fonulyn]

Noooo your comment was fine! Really, it actually made me laugh. My tweets were more about the general situation in the fanfic-community, in more than one fandom. People don't seem to understand that comments can really be what keeps writers going, and assume that they don't need to show they've read. Like, I've gotten several messages along the lines of "I love your fics I read them all!" from people I've NEVER seen comment on a single one of them, and as sweet as the message is in itself, it's sort of... too late? The most agonizing part of posting fic is waiting if anyone cares about it enough for it to be continued, so a message like the aforementioned one, months later even, isn't really that helpful. Not when I've already beaten myself for being a failure for all of the time in between

[mibutt]

EEEE THE KISS ah god every update I get more and more excited. Curious to find out more about the mysterious mountain bird shadow creatures?? They're giving me the creeps ovo

Also qmi yes pls make out more, Kim Heechul is best life coach and knows alllllll <3333333

[fonulyn]

Awh I'm really glad to hear that! I hope that the following updates continue to do the same ;)

Heechul is indeed amazing, right 8)

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D