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[fic] Minho/Key - SHINee - High Maintenance - Chapter 5/10

Dec 08, 2013 18:48

Title: High Maintenance; Chapter 5/10
Author: fonulyn
Rating: NC17 (overall)
Pairing: Minho/girl!Key (Minho/Gwiboon)
Other characters: Jonghyun, Onew, Zhou Mi, Boa, girl!Taemin (some are around more than others)
Warnings: --
Wordcount: 47 200 (overall); 4585 for this part
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: When Gwiboon's ( Read more... )

character: taemin, author: fonulyn, verse: mechanic, rating: nc17, length: multichapter, type: au, pairing: minho/key

Comments 19

minsunshine December 8 2013, 20:04:34 UTC

omg i loved this chapter alsdfjkaldsfjslds your writing is just so romantic and the feels it gives me <333

Naturally, she stops to stand next to Minho, tugging a little on his belt as he notices how askew it is. Might as well make her man seem presentable.
idk why i really loved this part. i love it when key nitpicks about minho looks it's so canon in my mind lmao

and the whole part after the gwiboon meets minho's parents... i love quiet bed scenes like this. just cuddling and talking so cute ;~~~; the pace of their relationship is perfect. as always, it was a super delight to read!!! i'll wait for the next part <3

fonulyn December 13 2013, 20:36:11 UTC

asnjdn thank you so much ;;♥ I'm so happy you like it! and that the romantic vibe gets across, this was supposed to be a (mostly) lighthearted romantic comedy so then it's doing something right :D

ahaha ofc Key wants Minho to look the most presentable possible at any time 8)

I love scenes like that too which is probably why I have to fight myself not to write ten of them in each fic I do ;; ah but I enjoy them so much.

thank you again, sweetie! :D glad you're enjoying!

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fonulyn December 13 2013, 20:37:20 UTC

thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear you're enjoying it, and that the pacing is good :D ♥

patzmelody01 December 9 2013, 00:30:04 UTC

Spotty spot spot spot.

fonulyn December 13 2013, 20:37:49 UTC

I hope you'll like it~~

keygasmic December 9 2013, 02:06:44 UTC

eeep! silly gwiboon!

I love this~ ♥

fonulyn December 13 2013, 20:38:12 UTC

thank you! :D ♥

sabrina165 December 9 2013, 04:36:37 UTC

Whoa jealous Gwiboon is awesome! So she's been hurt before... Now I'm curious....

fonulyn December 13 2013, 20:38:50 UTC

poor bby hasn't had the best luck with men :( but now Minho makes up for everything~ 8) thank you for reading and commenting! ♥