[fic] Minho/Key - SHINee - Shadegrown; part 3/3

Feb 16, 2013 14:06

Title: Shadegrown
Author: fonulyn
Rating: NC17? tho maybe more R
Pairing: Minho/Key
Warnings: uhm technically Key isn’t human?
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: Minho would run, he really would. But the look in those pale blue, almost white eyes makes him stop, piercing him and rooting him into the spot. This must be the ( Read more... )

author: fonulyn, rating: nc17, length: multichapter, type: au, character: jonghyun, pairing: minho/key

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maddiecupcake February 16 2013, 12:51:01 UTC
OH GOD IT'S OVER NOOOO. This was perfect. Seriously.
I just DDDDDD:
I was devastated when key left and omg I nearly feel off my bed when he came back.
And I dont mind that you dont go into detail when they have sex. It makes it more special. It makes it more about their connection.
The ending was perfect. I am more than satisfied. Thank you, so fucking much.

I'll definitely be back to read this again.

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fonulyn February 16 2013, 13:56:30 UTC
you have no idea how relieved I am you liked it! ;; when I was finishing it up I got these horrid doubts that I'd be the only one who'd enjoy it and I almost dug myself into a hole with no way out XD

I'm glad you enjoyed the sex scenes, too, even if they're more vague :) I'm not very good at explicit smut so I often tend to fall into the vague version. thankfully sometimes it works in my favour, haha!

thank you so much! ♥

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loveshineebang February 16 2013, 12:55:54 UTC
finally the last chapter is out... :)
and minkey always be my sweet corny and horny OTP... ^^
ugh, there are so much feeling of minkey lately... i'm so happy :)

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fonulyn February 16 2013, 13:57:52 UTC
I am sorry it was so late! I don't know how I forgot :|

but thanks for reading! :D ahhh and yess all the minkey feels~♥

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koukaiaru February 16 2013, 20:18:42 UTC
SPOT (gosh i'm so sorry i always spot but i really can't comment tonight ;a; i'm just gonna say that i love this SO MUCH but i'm gonna give you the rest tomorrow, i'm so sorry once more ;a;)

and btw it was a pleasure to discuss the history of lube with you at 2 am 8)

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koukaiaru February 17 2013, 11:29:46 UTC
ok first of all I KNEW IT. hahahah i had a hunch they were key's memories, the figure who minho dreamt of first was his mother, and then the crowd who abused him, kids at school? kjfgnsldgkhsd. i loved it <3 only why did Minho dream of Key's memories...

“There hasn’t been anyone to ask from. For as long as I remember.” THIS BREAKS MY HEART. ;a; And I totally get why Minho gets so protective~

Yet, Minho doesn’t pull back. He watches until the transformation finishes, and carefully reaches out to touch. The nails are rough underneath his fingertips as he traces the shape, surprised at how his hands aren’t shaking. this is so intimate ;a; fghkjdlsa. i love it.

The only sign he was ever there is the blanket on the floor right next to the window, the place he used to occupy more often than not ( ... )

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fonulyn February 17 2013, 12:10:51 UTC
haha I guessed you had it all figured out XD idk if I can give you a long explanation on why Minho dreamed of the memories, but it has to do with what Kibum is and the close contact they have, kind of an emotional bleed-through.

poor kibummie bb has been so lonely ;;

ansdfkjgnh I don't even know what to say in response. just. thank you so much your comment is awesome ;;♥♥♥

I'm glad too that you pushed me into writing and posting it! I'm seriously so useless with these things XD I never manage to finish stuff unless someone is kicking my butt into it. it's tragic :(

ilu too~♥♥♥

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fonulyn February 17 2013, 12:02:06 UTC
don't worry about it at all bb!

ahaha and now we are much more educated about the history of lube XD

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salome620 February 17 2013, 10:01:28 UTC
aish! why does it feel like it's not yet finished?

when Kibum said that Minho's dreams are actually memories, my thought was that Minho is just like Kibum but he forgot about it. that's the second mysterious thing here for me. the first one, of course, is Kibum himself. what is he? where did he come from? why did he protect Minho at the start of the story? - i feel like this is only a few pieces of a puzzle put together. the puzzle still has other parts that has not yet fallen into place.

(*sigh*) but i love the happy ending. the simpleness of their need for each other. nnnngh... thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.

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fonulyn February 17 2013, 12:01:06 UTC
I'm sorry if it feels unfinished. this is how it had to be though, otherwise it would've turned out into a massive verse that I would've never finished at all XD it's more like a snippet, from a larger thing, I suppose.

the way I thought it, they weren't really Minho's memories, but bleed-through from Kibum, but you can choose to interpret it as you wish :) and at the start he didn't really protect Minho, he protected himself and protecting Minho just happened at the same time :) hope that clears it up! what he is, though, and where did he come from, those I can't answer.

thank you for reading! I hope you liked it anyway :)

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salome620 February 17 2013, 15:13:10 UTC
i not only liked it, i loved it. the mysteries just eat at me and keeps me thinking about it. hehehe... that's how good you wrote this. it worms into my mind even when it's already finished.

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stolenflower February 18 2013, 20:01:58 UTC
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

GOD THEY ARE SO PERFECT KEY GOING AND DEFEATING HIS ENEMIES SO THAT HE CAN STAY WITH MINHO FOREVER THEM SITTING UNDER A BROKEN WINDOW BECAUSE THAT'S THEIR SPOT AND IS KEY LEARNING TO WRITE? IDK BUT THAT'S WHAT I GOT FROM THAT? LMAO

ACKKK I CRY BECAUSE IT'S OVER AND I WANT MORE WHY MUST YOU HURT ME LIKE THIS? YOU HEARTLESS PERSON BE MORE LIKE MINHO AND TELL ME THAT YOU WONT HURT ME. TELL ME YOU WONT HURT ME ANYMORE OH GOD ;____________;

also, i was going to ask about minho's 'memories' but then i saw your reply to a comment and it matched my hypothesis exactly so...WE MUST HAVE SOME KIND OF TELEPATHY GOING ON BETWEEN US BB

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fonulyn March 16 2013, 14:53:58 UTC
OH MY GOD I FORGOT TO ANSWER ;______; CAN YOU EVER FORGIVE ME!?

abshjdfbhjb your comment totally made my day when you first posted it and now again! ;; BUT NO I WILL MAKE NO PROMISES I AM NOT A GOOD PERSON LIKE MINHO buuut I ...will promise that I will try not to hurt you too much? Would that work??

YES TELEPATHY I AGREE!

and thank you so much for your comment bb ;; ♥

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