This is what happens during M&O...
When I am bored to fucking death and all I have is a computer. I start writing stuff. Sometimes it actually turns out readable. So, I wrote two drabbles (people who are familiar with my work will recognise about 3 of my previous things in here) and I'm putting them up now. Also, I wrote an AF fanfic but I think it's horrible, I'm going to send it ( Read more... )
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I like the first one the best. Seeing the point of view of the man who is holding her hostage is interesting.
"The rest wonders where she went
He just insists he doesn’t know
And searches along
Always guiding them in
The wrong direction"
That's my favourite part. :)
The only crit I could possibly give, which isn't really crit...
"Her POV"
The "POV" kind of jolted me out of the rhythm. Maybe just entitling the two poems "Him" and "Her"?
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