Lipgloss and chess

May 08, 2009 21:43

Things have been going slow (and I found out that actually some people do read this. It's awesome. Thanks for the PM, ForrbiddenMoanz!) Anyway, I've been working on a huge story (33k words and counting) so pretty much all I wrote were drabbles, sonnets, normal poems, and one story. The story was written because of a subject my best friend gave me ( Read more... )

original fiction, drabbles

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rocketgirl2 May 9 2009, 02:08:59 UTC
Aw.

That was cute.
I liked your poems and the fic...it sorta reminded me of that one piece I wrote forever ago...*gazes off into distance*

I don't really have any crit for you right now, sorry. But keep writing!

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alcetis May 9 2009, 18:32:51 UTC
Haha, yay for chess-themed works.
I like the poems. Very dark and creepy, very effective. Good imagery.
I like what she whispers. "It's not even close to over". Gave me chills. ;)
Any crit on that story I probably already gave you.

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