New Fic!!

[annaiese]

            “I’m sure he’s a very reasonable man,” Gippal said trying desperately to hide his grin.

With narrowed eyes Rikku stared up at him, “you own the building don’t you?”

“Yea, yea I do.”

“No wonder rent was so cheap.”

Comments

[lady_nicole]

That was great! And the ending had me grinning! So sneaky, very Gippal-like.

[annaiese]

Yay!!! I'm so glad you liked it, it's been such a long time since I've written anything. I wasn't sure I could still pull it off. Now to finish those stupid commsphere things and beat this game!

[justhavefaith]

aaauuuuuwwwwww <333333

can't I fav it somewhere, like on fanfiction? (a)

[annaiese]

Yea, here's the link. I post all my stuff on both sites. =)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6283027/1/Pyreflies I hope that works. =)

[icicle_streams]

That was great! It felt heaps cannon, with heaps of little references to the games (I love little things like that!)

The only bit that felt weird was when Rikku was telling him about why 'We Al bhed' avoid the Farplane. I thought it was really interesting, but it seems weirdly phrased since Gippal's Al Bhed too, and it sounds like she's talking to someone who's not.

Great story though! :)

[icicle_streams]

Yeah... that part did come out really weird, I think I spent the majority of the fic rewriting that (to no avail)