Comments | quirkysmuse: Heroes, "An Office With a Window" Molly/Micah, rated PG

quirkysmuse

Heroes, "An Office With a Window" Molly/Micah, rated PG

Feb 10, 2008 16:14

Fandom: Heroes
Title: An Office With a Window
Author: quirkysmuse aka Paynesgrey
Characters: Molly Walker, and Micah Sanders is in there too (Micah/Molly)
Rating: PG
Recipient: apckrfan for the heroes_heroines 1st challenge.
Prompt:Molly Walker - a future fic about her as an adult, or at least an older teen. Is she still living with Matt & Mohinder?
Word Count: 2814
Notes/Spoilers ( Read more... )

heroes, micah/molly, flashfic

Comments 10

yoruichiyoshi12 February 10 2008, 22:59:22 UTC

Wow, that's like the best Molly/Micah fic I've read ^.^ I didn't want it to end lol.

quirkysmuse February 10 2008, 23:05:39 UTC

Thanks so much! ^___^

kleenexcow February 11 2008, 01:00:53 UTC

I loooooove the idea of Molly's power developing into precognition. I've never thought of her clarvoyance like that before, but it is an excellent, excellent idea. And tragic, too, because there's something intrinsically sad about being able to tell the future, I think. This was really well written and I liked it, a lot!

And your Molly/Micah interaction was so cute!

quirkysmuse February 11 2008, 01:22:41 UTC

Thank you so much. I was trying to figure out the best course for her powers to go, and that seemed like the most logical.
I'm glad you liked it and appreciate the comments!

qwi_xux February 11 2008, 01:07:36 UTC

That was awesome. I usually avoid Heroes fanfic because...well, lots of reasons, but this was recommended to me and it was just fantastic. Sweet and beautifully written, and I love the way you have grown Molly in her ability. That it frightened her was completely natural, and the Micah/Molly....*melts* So wonderful.

quirkysmuse February 11 2008, 01:23:23 UTC

Wow, thanks so much. That's a huge compliment considering you don't read much Heroes fanfic. I appreciate it!

apckrfan February 12 2008, 18:39:36 UTC

I was so very excited when I saw it was you who was writing for me, because I know it would be something I liked. And I was not disappointed.

This was great, really. Thank you!

quirkysmuse February 12 2008, 18:43:43 UTC

Wheee! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the comment! ^___^

mewiet March 1 2009, 02:36:39 UTC

Wow, that was lovely! You wrote Molly and Micah very believably. I particularly loved the "Cerebro" and "Micah-tized" comments, those were priceless. And, the idea of Micah finding out that Mohinder's computer has an attitude and doesn't like him because he kicks it...LMAO! That was so perfect, and so believable. I burst out laughing several times and my mom finally had to yell from the other room, "What's so funny?!"

And I really liked the ending, it gave an air of happiness and uncertainty at the same time. This fic was perfect. Thanks so much for writing!

~Camille~

quirkysmuse March 2 2009, 05:24:32 UTC

Thank you so much! I was glad to get your comments on this older story of mine. I appreciate it and am happy that you liked it.