Heroes, "The Devil and Her Treasures" chapter 6

[quirkysmuse]

Fandom: Heroes
Title: The Devil and Her Treasures
Author: paynesgrey
Artist: rebelle_elle
Word Count: 23,514
Rating: R
Characters/Pairings: Claire, Peter, Sylar, Elle, Noah Jr, Nathan, Rene, Danko, Knox, Daphne, Claire/Elle, Elle/Sylar, past Peter/Claire
Warnings character death, manipulation, implied incest, torture, violence, sexual situations

Notes: Written for heroes_bigboom. A

Comments

[dancingdragon3]

Nice look into Claire here. She is so complicated. She sees herself as a good guy, yet eagerly wants to torture someone. You make it clear that she has completely deluded herself into thinking Elle deserves it. Claire is living in such a dark place and you show that so well.

I am really sympathizing with Elle here. I am afraid to "turn the page." (Great job at evoking emotions out of your reader!)

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you! I'm glad you thought that on how I portrayed Claire.