Ouran, "Unexpected Impressions" Kyouya/Eclair, rated pg-13

[quirkysmuse]

Fandom: Ouran High School Host Club
Title: Unexpected Impressions
Author: Paynesgrey
Characters/Pairings: Eclair/Kyouya
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: end of the anime (loosely)
Notes: Written for the "Weakness" theme at ouran_contest.
Word Count: 498

Summary: Kyouya makes Eclair an offer.

Comments

[shinebunny]

I don't know why I love this couple, but I think it may be for the exact reason you pointed out - they're so similar. I really like "I was impressed... This isn't bribery." Just - so Kyouya.

[quirkysmuse]

Yes, I think their similarities had me shipping them right away. Like they would make this spectacular, evil duo, lol.

Thanks for reading! :)

[ceirwy]

I'm awfully frightened by the actual possibility of this pairing. It's kinda awesome.

[quirkysmuse]

I think it's a good possibility! Even if it's only in my head. XD

thanks for reading!

[starianprincess]

My first time reading this pair and it's so artfully written, that I'm actually considering the possibilities now. I love how you worded this story and how that last line was the kicker.

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you! :)

[landofthekwt]

Very interesting. These two very calculating people might make a good fit.

[quirkysmuse]

thanks!

[treeflamingo]

I think my favorite parts of this may be the things you don't say. They're such a subtle duo, Kyouya and Eclair, so it is suitable that there is so much darkness (figurative and otherwise) in this piece. I love how nothing about the hotel is explained. I love how intentions are never revealed. I love how we don't know why Eclair assumes that Kyouya is there to lay down an offer (rather than an ultimatum), only that she does so, and correctly. And I love that we don't know her response.

Favorite line: Their eyes meet, and Eclair searches for softness.

[quirkysmuse]

:D
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.