Heroes, "Crawl of Shadows" Peter/Lydia

[quirkysmuse]

Fandom: Heroes
Title: Crawl of Shadows
Author: Paynesgrey
Characters/Pairings: Peter/Lydia, slight Peter/Samuel
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,004
Genre: Drama
Spoilers: 4x03 "Ink", Lydia webisode "Slow Burn"
Notes: Done for the A-Z Meme for "Tattoo" for rtwofan's request.
Summary: Peter is drawn to the circus, and Lydia beckons him to her.

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

Wowzers!!! I totally loved this story!

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you!

[rtwofan]

Oooh, so dark and mysterious! I loved the UST in this story, and how Peter was confused, naive, and uncomfortable in her presence. So in character, and one of my favorite beats in the story is :

“Who… who are you?” he asks again, his jaw set and his expression firm.

“He’ll see you now,” she says.

I love the mystery there, how she didn't reveal all the answers; she dodged it and slinked away and I feel that, from what we know of Lydia, that's pretty in character too. Great job and thanks for the fast prompt delivery!

[quirkysmuse]

Thanks, chica! I'm glad you think so about the characterizations. :D

[commen_sense]

seeing as we've barely seen enough of lydia to deduce her characterizatino much, you have done a very, very good job. i love how mysterious she is in this, very true to her character and peter's uncomfortablness at her nudity, aw pete! :D

loved it. but when have i not loved any of your fics?

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you so much! Yeah, it's hard with these new characters, but I'm glad it worked for you. <3

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you so much for the great comments!

[thetinysambo]

Gorgeous piece of work - loved it :)

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you! :3