Comments | quirkysmuse: Heroes, "The Smile in the Water" Tracy Strauss, rated PG

quirkysmuse

Heroes, "The Smile in the Water" Tracy Strauss, rated PG

Jul 01, 2009 12:09

Fandom: Heroes
Title: The Smile in the Water
Author: Paynesgrey
Rated: PG
Character: Tracy Strauss
Word Count: 322
Genre: Suspense/General
Spoilers: the preview of Volume 5, "Redemption"
Notes: Written for the "Sound" challenge at heroes_contest

Summary: The sound of water is not so safe and innocent.

( The Smile in the Water )

heroes, tracy, challenge

Comments 11

commen_sense July 1 2009, 17:18:45 UTC

wow... the description in this was awsome. great job. :D

quirkysmuse July 1 2009, 17:19:41 UTC

Thank you! <3

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quirkysmuse July 1 2009, 19:24:05 UTC

Thank you, darlin! :D

rtwofan July 2 2009, 22:17:44 UTC

AWESOME. I love all the water imagery in this. Especially the last line. Tracy is pretty damn cool.

quirkysmuse July 2 2009, 23:14:12 UTC

Thanks darlin! YES TRACY ROCKS!

superkappa July 11 2009, 12:44:03 UTC

The imagery in here was amazing. I loved the descriptions. I didn't like Tracy much at first, but she's really begun to grow on me.

quirkysmuse July 12 2009, 13:40:20 UTC

Thanks for reading! Yeah, it took me a little while to get into Tracy too.

hamimifk July 11 2009, 16:12:43 UTC

o__o Wow, I like this little revenge bit. I loved the whole water thing, that was a nice way for her to sneak around. Nice job. :D

quirkysmuse July 12 2009, 13:40:38 UTC

Thank you! :D