Dollhouse, "Veneer" Echo

Feb 20, 2009 10:26

Fandom: Dollhouse
Title: Veneer
Author: Paynesgrey
Character: Echo
Rating: PG
Word Count: 260
Prompt: "Control" at dollhouseflash
Genre: Introspection
Summary: Echo does not see the invisible tether that keeps her from being free.

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juliet316 February 20 2009, 16:41:46 UTC
I think that sums up the show so far to a T. Very nice fic.

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quirkysmuse February 20 2009, 16:47:36 UTC
Thank you!

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quirkysmuse February 20 2009, 16:59:07 UTC
Thanks! I love how creepy the show essentially is. There's so much emotion you can tap into.

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mamaboolj February 20 2009, 17:07:53 UTC
The whole "treatment" concept really fascinated me, how they program that into the personalities. I'm glad you touched on it.

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quirkysmuse February 20 2009, 17:10:08 UTC
Thanks! I find it interesting too, like the Actives are programmed to know it's necessary and nothing bad comes from it. I can't wait to see them delve more into the concept.

Thanks again for reading!

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emmademarais February 20 2009, 20:32:52 UTC
Rather chilling, isn't it, this way they have of taking so much hope and joy and making it not just moot, but never mourned?

You've captured the tone of the show quite well. It's creepy and dysfunctionally wistful in a way and you've crawled inside that world to shed some insight on the inner workings that make it so.

Nice job!

Thanks for writing for the challenge!

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quirkysmuse February 21 2009, 18:25:24 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think so. The creepiness is something I really like about the show.

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obiwahn February 20 2009, 21:13:04 UTC
Very haunting, and heartbreaking.

there’s nothing in the outside world she could possibly love or fear.

Such a reminder that true joy only exists in a world with pain, and vice-versa.

Great work!

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quirkysmuse February 21 2009, 18:25:36 UTC
Thanks! I appreciate it!

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