A Hard Night's Sleep

[quiprofanfics]

Title: A Hard Night’s Sleep
Author: quietprofanityFandom: The Beatles

Comments

[xxinlovebutlazy]

Mmm, that was hot<33 I love your style of writing and those small wittle details you throw in to elaborate. And the story itself was fantastic; the banter, Paul's thoughts, John's bluntness... I love it<33

Beautiful job! (:

[quietprofanity]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)

[quietprofanity]

Thank you. <3

[katexlove]

Really great! I loved "The love you get is equal to the love you give" :) Lovely job!

[quietprofanity]

Thanks! I'd hoped the quote would come off well. :)

[eleanorrigby_66]

That was amazing!! Really amazing!! And I can actually see it happening - it was so realistic, as if that really could have happened.

And you got the dialouge perfect as well.

I loved
John did not stop. “Paul, Paul. Takes me to bed and gives me no attention. He’s a swine, he is, Paul.”
HAHAHAA!

and
He delighted in being John’s equal in all things, and now - when they came together as one like this - he wasn’t.
I love how you described their relationship perfectly. I always find it hard to word the dynamics of individual pairs in the group, but you sure did it with John/Paul.

Favourited! :)

[quietprofanity]

And I can actually see it happening - it was so realistic, as if that really could have happened.

Oh wow! I would never make that claim myself, but it's very flattering you think so.

I'm also glad you like the dialogue. I have to admit that's one of my favorite lines as well.

I always find it hard to word the dynamics of individual pairs in the group, but you sure did it with John/Paul.

Thank you! Reading about John and Paul, I always found the sort of love/fierce competition they had to be their big appeal.

Thank you so much for the comment and the favorite. :D

[quietprofanity]

Thank you so much! :D

[withalittlewit]

XD I just caught the butt picture of your icon, and I was like, "That's totally John Lennon's ass :D" and then it was and I felt oddly pleased/shocked with myself for being so obsessed with the Beatles to be able to distinguish John's ass from everyone else's. D: