Vampiric

[quiprofanfics]

Title: Vampiric
Author: quietprofanityFandom: Watchmen

Comments

[quietprofanity]

Terrible food metaphors aside

I did wonder how the icing was going to set on the steamy cake. Perhaps it melts just like Wanda's self-loathing melts under cunnilingus or ... something.

The fandom needs more Rule63! like this~

Aw, bless! :D Your whole comment has me blushing. Thank you so much.

Fan art for YOU!

[ook]

Fresh from the pchat today:

Re: Fan art for YOU!

[quietprofanity]

Aww. My personal canon is actually non-boob window but it is bad form to look lesbian fanart in the mouth and I love the faces and Wanda's vest too much. Thank you. ^_^

Re: Fan art for YOU!

[ook]

If you go by the paintchat, I fixed the boob window for you (I kept the crescent moon symbol on Danielle's chest though). And to think that I thought my re-designed boob window was too "matronly." ;)

[lady_wormtongue]

UNF. I think what I loved the most was how vivid everything was. Your descriptions are fantastic. Also, nice handling of the impotence thing. Yay!

[michichu2]

That's an interesting thing to pick out, I have to admit I was confused about that until I saw this comment. And now light dawns on Marblehead.

Very clever, Quid, very clever.

[quietprofanity]

Hee. Yeah, people have thought up lots of creative things to match Dan's impotence (anorgasmia, FSAD), but vaginismus worked the best for my purposes.

Thanks. :)

[quietprofanity]

I think what I loved the most was how vivid everything was. Your descriptions are fantastic.

Oh thank you. That's something as a writer I love to hear.

Also, nice handling of the impotence thing. Yay!

Hee. Thanks. I plan to utilize it for maximum angst in another story (in another universe, actually) but I'm glad you liked it.

[brancher]

Ahhhhhhhh GOD

I don't even like femmeslash, but this --

It's not even just a good 63fic, it's not even just a good D/R fic, it's just GOOD sex writing, period. God, they're both so fucked up, and I love that you put in Danielle's hangups and no-go zones, too, and her freaky, freaky, kinks, and Wanda talking dirty to her to get her off and yet meaning every word, and it was awkward and neither of them has any idea what they're doing and SOOOOOOOO HOT, oh my fucking god.

Damn.

[quietprofanity]

Thanks! (I'm surprised you said you don't like f/f as a rule; I really dug your Danielle/Laurie fic.) But eeee, your comment! Thank you. I remember you saying after "The Gilded Cage" that you wanted me to write some hot porn, so I'm glad I delivered for you. :)

[brancher]

haha, yeah, we are totally square now.

It's true! I have no idea how that Laurie/Danielle fic happened. I don't even remember writing it. I was nowhere near there nine months ago. It was a one-armed man.

[quietprofanity]

Yay, awesome! Now finish Teshuva so my womanpain born from reading "Every Day is Like Sunday" can be healed. XD Powerful stuff, BTW.

I have no idea how that Laurie/Danielle fic happened.

Hee. I do like it though. I'm getting to like the Dan/Laurie pairing a little more these days from writing it, but weirdly enough I think I prefer them as lesbians when they're not simultaneously fucking Rorschach. XD

[michichu2]

Very, very hot. Love the kink, LOVE Rorschach's darker sort of desire, and love the exploration of Wanda's misogyny, and the fact that she thinks of Rorschach as a man. Both of them were very well-written in their female forms, and very in-character as much as I would imagine their girl!forms to be. And, of course, it's hot.

[quietprofanity]

Thank you so much. I loved playing with Wanda's issues in this fanfic (I kind of think she's funny, sad and scary all at the same time). I'm glad the characterization worked for you, too. And that you thought it was hot. XD

[michichu2]

I love that description, funny, sad, and scary all at the same time! It's so true. OMG I love this story. :D

[quietprofanity]

Hee. (Although, when I thought about it more, all of those traits apply to canon Rorschach, too. XD)