Title: Feel Good…Together

[quimby_13]

“I know what would make you feel better…We could steal something.”

“Yes!”

LATER…

The two women sat at the kitchen counter in Nate’s condo. Nathan was still out cold on the couch, snoring lightly. Both the girls had brought up their drinks from the bar and had been sipping through them while on Nate Watch. Parker’s hair was hanging loosely about her

Comments

[misantrop_whore]

I don't think it sucks. It's...direct. I mean, it doesn't involves in the flirting, the push and pull (sometimes I'm kind of ridiculous to find words to describe what I'm thinking...sorry)
Anyway...Now I want to know where are you going, because is not completed, right?
There, keep on going, here you have a reader :D

[quimby_13]

I wasn't really going to continue, but I may be able to join it with another fic and *starts typing feverishly* I'll think about it.

Thanks for the feedback and,heck, just for reading.

[lucdarling]

here's another reader!

I quite enjoyed this, seeing Parker be forward & direct (not unsual) but Sophie is backstepping her advances. You really captured Sophie's emotions with the descriptions of her voice - stressed, too loud, too sharp.

& HOORAY for being my first fic of the new season. I went to bed hoping there'd be something when I woke up. :)

[kattahj]

Hee! Parker is very persuasive, isn't she? Great last line in particular.