Knock at his Door

Nov 11, 2011 22:01

Title: Knock at his Door
Character/Pairing: Nathaniel Taylor/Alicia Washington
Word Count: 1,424
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13
Summary: When he answered the knock at his door he wasn’t surprised to see Lt. Washington standing there. He was however surprised to see her standing there with her hair down, wearing a red dress with a plunging neckline and a ( Read more... )

alicia washington, nathaniel taylor, terra nova

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bellakitse November 12 2011, 04:53:27 UTC
OH! I hope you post it at the community cause this is awesome!

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makesometime November 12 2011, 11:34:37 UTC
Very nice! I love the twist on the prompt :D

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direwolfdragon November 12 2011, 15:10:42 UTC
Something was wrong and he wanted to know what.

hehehehe, loved that line right there. This was excellent, thanks for sharing :)

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mercscilla November 12 2011, 16:57:54 UTC
I love you for turning my prompt around because this is so much better! :D

The switch from Wash, the soldier, to Wash, the woman, is done perfectly and gives the story the certain kick, especially since you didn't turn her into a girly girl but a strong woman, who knows what she wants. Essentially she kept parts of her soldier persona and added a little swing to it. :)

Brilliant piece. Thank you so much for writing.

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