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Red, Red Roses (Tokyo Babylon)

Aug 21, 2007 17:24

Title: Red, Red Roses
Author: aishuu
Fandom: Tokyo Babylon
Wordcount: 350
Note: Written from a prompt, "petals, Hokuto" from dimensionwitch.
Summary: Hokuto receives a gift of flowers from Seishirou.

( Red, red roses... )

shortfic, clamp, tokyo babylon, drabble

Comments 15

a_white_rain August 21 2007, 22:30:37 UTC

Oh. The last bit. ♥

aishuu August 23 2007, 02:56:39 UTC

If it doesn't kick at the end, the shortfic's worth nothing. ^_^

tamchronin August 21 2007, 22:32:06 UTC

I like that. It's something I can picture Seishirou doing, not caring what the rest of the world thinks or does...

The end turns the story from "WTF" to "awww." ~mush~ Nice little story. ^_^

aishuu August 23 2007, 02:57:29 UTC

Seishirou's up to something definitely - most likely just keeping Hokuto off-balance enough to work with. I'm assuming this happens after she threatens him with a knife. Glad you liked.

akerushin August 21 2007, 23:06:07 UTC

*sighs* :)

aishuu August 23 2007, 02:57:43 UTC

I'll assume that's a good sigh!

sophiap August 22 2007, 00:10:03 UTC

The last line is a killer. Lovely work, m'dear.

aishuu August 23 2007, 02:57:55 UTC

WAI! Sophia liked!

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aishuu August 23 2007, 02:58:32 UTC

Thanks!

I did originally go the sakura route in my thinking, but I decided that it was too cliche for TB.