Cat's Paw (Bleach/XXXholic, oneshot)

[aishuu]

Cat's Paw
~ A Bleach/XXXholic Crossover ~
By aishuu
Note: Thanks to sache for being a great beta on this, and sophiap for egging me on. This is the second story in the "Butterfly's Web" universe, to be co-written with Sophia Prester, but is also a standalone fic. The first story is Je Chante Pour Passer Le Temps, which is not required reading, but suggested.

Comments

[tdei]

♥♥♥

::fawns~!!::

[aishuu]

thanks.

[incandescens]

Brilliant. I'm really enjoying this series. Also, loved this line:

"Not all responsibilities are acquired by request," the cat replied.

Just right.

[archangelbeth]

Oooo, neat!

(incandescens, please tell me when more go up!)

[incandescens]

Your wish is my command. Did you see the earlier one she mentions, Je Chante Pour Passer le Temps, at http://community.livejournal.com/quillofferings/69978.html ? Also worth the read.)

[aishuu]

thanks, glad you liked...

[kuroineko13]

Whoo! Another chapter! ^_^

You don't mind if I revise, do you?

When you said "full-heartedly"...well, I think that should have been "wholeheartedly." It sounds a bit less awkward. So does the phrase "so I can see them" when Yuuko asks Watanuki to move aside so she can see Yoruichi. Yuuko is too well-spoken to use the "adolescent they," as the singular usage of "they" and "them" is oft referred to. If you don't want to use "her," then maybe you should just cut out the phrase. It'll probably still flow just as well. Another thing that is awkwardly-phrased is "not-particularly-bright," which I believe should not be dashed.

Er. When you said "tempera," did you mean "tempura?"

Gah! I sent unsolicited revisions to an otherwise wonderful chapter! *strikes them out*

[aishuu]

glad you liked.

[annapeace]

Awesome!

[aishuu]

thanks

[_andricongirl]

oooohhh. That was great!

[aishuu]

thanks