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Mighty on the Earth (Hunter x Hunter, 1/4)

Apr 08, 2006 22:29

Mighty on the Earth
~ A Hunter x Hunter Fic ~
by aishuu
Rating: PG-13 for later violence
Summary: Once upon a time, Kurapica lived in happiness with his people. Life among the Kurata tribe, and their doom.

( I desire to share happiness with my people )

mighty on the earth, multiparter, hunter x hunter

Comments 8

jmjv April 9 2006, 10:36:45 UTC

Ooooh... you're writing an HxH fic^^

This opening chapter is pretty good so I'm looking forward to reading more!

aishuu April 9 2006, 13:48:17 UTC

Glad you're enjoying.

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aishuu April 9 2006, 13:46:00 UTC

Considering everyone gets killed in the tribe, I don't think Olathe is a Sue character. ^_^

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aishuu April 9 2006, 17:19:45 UTC

....were you reading my notes? j/k

No, no glorious death for her. She's pretty much there to indicate what Kurapica's life would have been like. Married, children, honored role in culture... yada yada. All of which the Spiders take away.

qem_chibati April 10 2006, 02:24:00 UTC

I'm really intrigued by this. It seems like a peaceful, inclusive little clan, and helps explain how everyone was together; and sets up a starting point for how Kurapica could be the last one left, since everyone comes back to rejoin the clan.

I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next. ^_^

aishuu April 11 2006, 16:30:11 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it. I decided I'd create a very isolated group, since the massacre manages to kill just about everyone.

sushinase April 12 2006, 04:01:41 UTC

wow.

Someday they would probably get married, but neither spoke about that.

and

She shrugged. "Maybe when we're older. My parents seem to like it."

and the future that his father wants for him and all those other tribe people and the names. they have names now. and.. *gulps* wonderful. it's great to see where kurapica came from, quite interesting what you made of the kurata :) and it does make sense.. them being isolated I mean :)

so yeah, i wanted to leave a proper coherent review but other than 'this is awesome omGz!11!!!eleven!!!' i don't think much more is gonna come from me :) *smiles blandly*

aishuu April 12 2006, 15:49:06 UTC

Yeah, there's so many hints about the future that should have been - I'm so cruel to him. ^_^

I figure the tribe would have to be very isolated for them all to be wiped out in one blow. Glad you enjoyed this.