Eternities in Autumn Skies (Hikago, G, Gen)

[aishuu]

Fic: Eternities in Autumn Skies

Comments

[_hissori]

Really enjoyed this a lot. ^^ Liked the descriptions of autumn (Sai really does seem like an autumn person, ne?), and the actual changing of the tenses to fit the time was very original, something I haven't seen yet for this challenge. All three scenes were also brought full-circle very nicely. *somehow feels very content after reading this*

[aishuu]

As i look it over, I notice some tense problem in the "future" scene, but that's to be expected. Glad you liked it - it was a pain to write, and I'm NOT gonna do it again. Future tense bites.

[haverstock]

Brilliant story, as usual, but I noticed some minor editing problems. Nothing too big though, and nothing you probably don't already know~

I am jealous of your mad writing skills. ;_;

[aishuu]

This fic was written for a temps-mort challenge, which means it was published 40 minutes after I started. I did do some corrections on the ff.net version. ^_^ Glad you liked.

[haverstock]

Oh! Okay! I was wondering what was up with the mistakes -- you're always so amazing at editing (no small wonder there), so I think I was more curious than anything else 8D

...I could never write something that gorgeous in 40 minutes ^^;

I'm going through all of your HikaGo fics right now, as I have no life and one day left of summer vacation~ Don't be surprised if you get a couple more comments from me! ^_^

[aishuu]

*g* Comments are always appreciated.

I must say it's very strange to hear "summer vacation" right now since it's currently -20 F outside.

[idylll]

I have to say that I've read this over and over, over the years since it's been written, and it's still one of my favorite pieces. ^_^

[aishuu]

*g* It's really wonderful to hear when something stands up that well. ^_^