Something Wicked This Way Comes (Death Note, 12/30)

[aishuu]

Something Wicked This Way Comes
~ An Alternate Death Note Fanfiction ~
by: aishuu
Notes: For 30_kisses To start at the beginning, go Here

Comments

[baka_mazoku]

Heh... interesting... very much L and Misa Misa in spirit as well as staying true to canon (re friend).

Hmm... that's an interesting solution for why L doesn't wear shoes and socks thou; bad arches...

[aishuu]

I think it's a fun idea, the shoes things.

There's some canon here, but I've found AUs work best when they draw on the already established happenings.

[baka_mazoku]

*nodnods*

Indeed... but since I've got arch problems as well... so, yeah... I can sympathize with L...

But yeah... will be interesting to see the diary of MisaMisa and her friend.

[sailormac]

It seems there's such a thing as too much sugar even for L. ~_^

You do have such good insights into this character. You make someone who comes across as just plain odd in canon sometimes a hundred percent belivable -- you make everything he does seem practically *logical.*

I imagine Raito's *not* going to be happy when he realizes L went behind his back.

[aishuu]

I don't know why I've had such luck with L, because he's not my favorite. However, I do see him as vastly logical, and he'd be able to justify just about anything.

[svz_insanity]

I second SailorMac, you managed to make some of L's peculiar habits actually seem logical! <3 *adores*

I love the little details about L, how he can't sing, but yet he has an equivalent of a black belt in karate (^_~ typical).

Raito will not be pleased in the chapter(s) to come, eh?

[aishuu]

Raito will certainly be unhappy in a bit. ^_^;; I'm so mean to the characters.

I thought karate was a good choice, since L seems to fight with his legs and karate relies quite a bit on kicks.

[maaeya]

Don't socks absorb sweat? I mean, anything on your feet makes them sweat, but at least with socks it feels dry... ?? I hate wearing shoes with no socks because of this fact.

[aishuu]

I've always found that socks make my feet sweat more. *shrugs*

[hideko]

Wow.. Since the time you posted this chapter, I've been reading from the beginning, and loved every moment of it. This story is so wonderful! I adore how L and Raito interact, because it's so true to the manga. Can't wait for the next chapter~ ♥

[aishuu]

Glad you liked. I think it has a very "based off canon" feel for the moment... it'll probably start changing in a bit.