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Brightly Burning 5/? (Hikago)

Feb 01, 2005 00:17

Aishuu Offers:
Brightly Burning
A Hikaru no Go Alternate Universe
Disclaimers: Hotta and Obata. Shonen Jump. Not Mine.

( Let This Be Enough )

multiparter, hikago, brightly burning

Comments 72

angstxiety February 1 2005, 06:23:53 UTC

Whee~! Chapter 5! ^___^ Great job, as always! ^^ I really enjoyed the part where Amano was interviewing Shindou. Really great.

Akari had backed off a bit, her face pale. "Who, Hikaru?"
And I love this line the most.

aishuu February 2 2005, 06:23:13 UTC

Akari is so underappreciated. This is not HikaAka, but she is a WONDERFUL supporting character.

angstxiety February 2 2005, 06:34:27 UTC

Yeah, Akari is wonderful. She's a great friend to Hikaru, but I like her with Mitani better. Although it's really nice to see Akari in this fic. She adds more mystery to who Shindou really is.

aishuu February 2 2005, 06:38:46 UTC

She unravels part of his background as well. We see he spent the last few years as a normal student, playing sports. It's his sudden change which is one of the keys.

Mitani does not exist in this universe - he's probably been killed for cheating. ^_~

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sangoire February 1 2005, 06:35:57 UTC

::blinks:: A new chapter? Damn. I'm never going to finish my homework, am I?

Interesting and strange how Akira isn't the one who Hikaru's chasing this time--I wonder how he'll react to being so completely dismissed by someone he considers a rival? (Oh, shank!) And I think I'm starting to like Amano more and more, just because his viewpoint as an outsider in the pro world is so different from the ones we usually see. I am a little confused, though. I thought that Sai's summer playing NetGo was what taught him how to update his style to modern rules? Why is Hikaru's playing style still antique?

And now I feel guilty saying something like "waiting breathlessly for the next part!", even though I am, because it seems really, really greedy. ^^;;; Great chapter.

aishuu February 2 2005, 06:24:21 UTC

Homework, NOW. *shoves sangoire at the books.

No, Akira is not Hikaru's target. This is a different world, after all.

Glad you enjoyed.

oshunanat February 1 2005, 07:15:37 UTC

*squee*

What a nice thing to come home from work too! I love how brash Hikaru is here, and how close the game ended up being--it makes perfect sense that the game ended the way that it did, because most of the series, Shindou is always so close to defeating Akira yet never quite making it.

I love how you use Amano in this story too, it works quite well!

Thanks for posting this so soon!

aishuu February 2 2005, 06:25:39 UTC

I luv your icon. Suskiyo!! Seiyuu candy!!!

^_~ I'm not talking about the game right now. I'll probably cover it more in depth later.

Amano is becoming my alter ego. It's sad.

oshunanat February 2 2005, 15:25:33 UTC

Hee. I love Suskiyo! It's so much crack, altough I would have been utterly traumatized if my math prof kept handcuffs on his chair XD

lady_addiction February 1 2005, 08:00:46 UTC

this is going to sound so fangirlish...but I am just, just so thankful you posted another part so quickly! am now quietly savouring the moment before reading...

Also, read your post on your last year's accomplishments...damn! 31 fics! If only I was so proliferate...

aishuu February 2 2005, 06:26:18 UTC

I can write quickly when the stars are aligned.

I did the accomplishments so I could SAY I've actually completed stuff. People tend to doubt me...

xiaobai7988 February 1 2005, 08:50:29 UTC

=__= Akira now thinks of Hikaru as his rival, but Hikaru doesn't care...I got a bad feeling about this....^^;;

An Update~!! >__< And a fast one too~!!! >___< Excellent job on the match. I love it >__<

aishuu February 2 2005, 06:26:44 UTC

Bad feeling? Don't you trust the writer? ^_~

Glad you liked.