Love in Reverse (Skip Beat!, drabble)

[aishuu]

Title: Love in Reverse
By: aishuu
Series: Skip Beat
Character/Pairing: Kyoko/Shotaro
Rating: T/PG-13
Wordcount:300
Notes: For 31_days, Day/Theme: September 9. Where are you now? 'Cause I don't want to meet you.
Summary: Kyouko's rage is an ugly thing.

Comments

[mmmdraco]

Yeah. You're definitely getting back into the swing of things with this. Amazing work. ^_^

[aishuu]

Glad to hear it worked for you. It's an ugly piece, but I was trying for truthful. We all have that person we'd cheerfully push in front of a bus in our lives... Kyouko's just honest enough to admit it.

[lanerose]

♥!

[blackcentury]

Oh yeah~~ you go, girl! This Kyouko strikes me as being as appalingly honest on her rage as she is in canon. But it's mostly played for laugh there, or cut short with comedy. So this is very refreshing, to get the scale of just how much anger she has in her.

Anyway, I think it's 'rage-filled' instead of 'raged-filled'? I mean, I think if you want to put rage in past form you can't put 'filled' behind it. I can't quite remember the rule. But I think that's how it goes...

[demoerin]

Wow. This is not how I would first see Kyoko, but it really works. Maybe because it's in first person POV, because I could see her feeling such things, but I can't see her conscience allowing her to truly go that dark. Still, this brings home the force of her rage in a great way.

[utensil_drawer]

I'm rooting for you, Kyoko! Nice drabble. :)

[aishuu]

Thank you!