The Matriarch (Naruto, Itachikage-verse)

May 30, 2010 21:05

Fic: The Matriarch
Author: aishuu
Fandom: Naruto
Character(s): Mikoto, Itachi, Sasuke
Wordcount: 1,250
Rating: PG
Notes: Day 18 of 40 Days, theme from melithiel: translations are like women--the most beautiful are not always the most faithful. Part of the Itachi Hokage Verse
Credit: Thanks to sophiap for betaing ( Read more... )

naruto, oneshot, itachi hokage verse, 40 days fest

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cherokee1 May 31 2010, 02:06:15 UTC
I enjoy this universe, very much.
The lady reminds me of the iron magnolias here in the south.
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aishuu May 31 2010, 14:24:29 UTC
A very good comparison, I think. Elegant and well-bred but with a soul of steel.

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rurounitriv May 31 2010, 02:24:48 UTC
Mikoto is probably going to be a bigger threat to Hokage!Itachi than anyone else. Poor guy just can't catch a break.

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aishuu May 31 2010, 14:25:25 UTC
I think he's caught several breaks (namely Shisui). But I wanted to throw him into the deep water with his family, and I think in some ways it's harder to fight against a mother than a father.

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rurounitriv June 1 2010, 02:48:12 UTC
And it'll be harder still if she succeeds in turning Sasuke against his brother.

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rosalui May 31 2010, 02:46:06 UTC
Noooooo it's not a betrayal ;_______;

IT COULD HAVE BEEN SO MUCH WORSE, MIKOTO. ;_______;

I love this verse. :3

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aishuu May 31 2010, 14:26:35 UTC
I don't think he can explain, though. "Hey, mom, I'm really taking the position because my other option was massacring the clan for mutiny..."

Um, that would go over real well?

Very glad you're enjoying this.

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rosalui May 31 2010, 15:04:15 UTC
Lolol, I know. XD But it doesn't stop me from weeping on the inside. <33

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acts_of_tekla May 31 2010, 03:23:53 UTC
Wait, she's going to use Sasuke against Itachi?!

...that's cold, man.

I mean, it's an awesome strategy, but...Itachi using himself against Sasuke in canon absolutely breaks my heart, because they're so clearly the absolute #1 most important anything in each others' lives, and twisting that is horrible.

Your Mikoto is an excellent character, and very different from other portrayals of her that I have read. I also like the idea (mentioned in the author's notes) of a Tsunade vs. Mikoto theme/idea.

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aishuu May 31 2010, 14:28:34 UTC
I think this is going back to the "shinobi as weapon" school of thought. Sasuke is her weapon. As for what happens between Itachi and Sasuke in this verse... sore wa himitsu da.

Very glad you liked the spin on her - I'm trying to make this universe unique. Since Tsunade is going to play a major role in a bit, I thought having Mikoto as her rival would be fun.

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acts_of_tekla June 1 2010, 01:51:32 UTC
Sasuke is by far my favorite character, so I'm definitely looking forward to his appearances.

I have to say though, as soon as I realized that some form of Tsunade vs. Mikoto vs. Itachi showdown was going to occur, my first thought was to run for the hills (and my second was to grab Sasuke on the way.)

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aishuu June 1 2010, 22:56:08 UTC
*laughs* Mikoto isn't the type to throwdown - she'd just poison Tsunade. Who would heal it, then go hunting, only to find Jiraiya has been convinced that Mikoto needs a strong man to protect her....

Yeah, could be interesting.

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shinigami002 May 31 2010, 04:27:38 UTC
Wow, interesting take on Mikoto. Emotional, powerful and heartbreaking.

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aishuu May 31 2010, 14:29:00 UTC
Thank you! I really had fun with this.

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