I don't know anything about Torchwood, but this Jack guy makes me giggle. Why aren't there more tentacle-rape yaoi?
...erm I think I said too much.
The Spirited Away drabble was just chilling. I shivered when I read that. Well written. You should remove the "and" between "ripping" and "filled" in the last section though.
...I need to direct you to ickaimp if you want to get into the whole tentacle thing. Especially involving Magic Kaitou (I think she's the ONLY tentacle writer I'll read because she puts things with such a humorous slant).
I blame the spirited away fic on my business law class. Really.... Now I have to edit AGAIN... damn exact word counts, they confuse the heck out of me. Thanks for letting me know.
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...erm I think I said too much.
The Spirited Away drabble was just chilling. I shivered when I read that. Well written. You should remove the "and" between "ripping" and "filled" in the last section though.
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I blame the spirited away fic on my business law class. Really.... Now I have to edit AGAIN... damn exact word counts, they confuse the heck out of me. Thanks for letting me know.
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The sound of paper ripping and filled the room
No 'and'
While Owen had nothing about Jack's bisexual habits
Against instead of about?
which made her eventual fate all that more intriguing
the instead of that?
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Gotcha on the first two, I think I'll leave the third as-is.
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Torchwood made me lol. jack is like an intergalactic space-slut. XD Poor Owen.
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