Comments | quillofferings: Moon at Apogee (CCS/XXXholic, 4/6)

aishuu in quillofferings

Moon at Apogee (CCS/XXXholic, 4/6)

Jan 13, 2008 14:07

Moon at Apogee
~ An XXXholic/Card Captor Sakura Fan Fiction ~
by aishuu
Characters: Yuuko/Clow, Yue
Summary: The past comes back to bite Yuuko as Clow's final legacy shows up on her doorstep. Set pre-CCS.
Notes: Hoping to finish this fic during January for fic_off.

Part 1 Part 2 Part 3

( We like our fun and we never fight )

clamp, xxxholic, multiparter, moon at apogee, card captor sakura, clow/yuuko

Comments 8

athenaltena January 13 2008, 19:41:23 UTC

The results were sometimes explosive, and once there had been green slime involved

LoL, I can so see that happening.

Once again, absolutely lovely. I especially love the description of Clow being like a little boy eager to show off his new toy. You're too good at this. :)

qem_chibati January 13 2008, 21:55:31 UTC

Oh. *Just stares.*

I love the imagery here, of friendship and of pain, and how sometimes Yuuko's shop can be a dark place indeed.

uminohikari January 13 2008, 22:32:31 UTC

Green slime! :Db

Your skill at imagery is ...really amazing.
♥ a lot

xtwilightzx January 14 2008, 03:30:48 UTC

I just absolutely love how you write these characters; they're so beautifully in character. Yuuko's thoughts, her interactions with both Clow and Yue - so lovely.

I especially love the little details you put in, like Yuuko letting Clow into her space, the suicide contracts and speaking an idea into existence.

*purrrrrrrrs*

serenityrages January 14 2008, 04:58:55 UTC

Hello. As usual, the chapter is beautiful, its flow is extremely well-constructed, and I cannot wait to read more. I loved that you used the Flower to introduce to Yuuko the concept of Clow Cards, because the Flower has always struck me as a particularly lovely and lively spirit. And that you put in Yuuko's power of words, which she stresses and all.

Um, you might want to correct this, though. Your beta may have overlooked it.

They were cook nicely, This in reference to the meal Yue prepared. I'm nitpicking, to be sure, but I guess it should be cooked to be in uniformity with the over-all tense of the story.