Kaleidoscope: 60° [SHINee; JongYu, JongMinho; TaeKey]

[yumeyana]

Kaleidoscope: 60°
yumeyana
SHINee | jonghyun x onew, jonghyun x minho
pg-13 / angst, romance, slight humor
You could pass as lovers, you think; how ironic and how painfully untrue. Onew and Jonghyun find some peace and quiet away from the rustle and bustle of the apartment, but never from the noise in each other's hearts. It's the duet they can't sing but

Comments

[jonghyun]

OMG HYUNG OHMYGOD.
This is really really beautiful. Heart-wrenching. T T
I CRY, A GOOD CRY~ But I love this. ♥

“Why can’t I fall in love with you instead?”
Yes Hyun, WHYYYY?

I can't wait for part 3. Make it thrice the length of this, then? XD

[emda]

wow.... I just read both parts cuz I've been missing your writings and GOD so beautifull yet so sad. Love all the parenthesis cuz it adds to all the feelings flying around. Love it!!!!!!!!!!!

[dailysky]

I had to go back and read the first part before reading this - I think I preferred the first part more. That's not to say that this part isn't gorgeous (it is. ♥) but I think this part complicated things too much, if that makes sense. It went from a love triangle to Days of Our SHINee, if that makes sense.

Still, I think the emotions in this were well put, and the repetition of words and phrases added a little something. ♥

Good job!

[ttaejoong_hyuk]

T^T sooo...minho is still not over jonghyun and jonghyun doesn't get minho and now jinki doesn't get jonghyun.....and in the end keymin is the only happy couple....aahhhh....i feel so bad for onew now....aaaahhh, love is so difficult...especially if in love with friends....>___>

[squaretofu]

Ahhh..your writings are beautiful..I really felt the emotions..poor Onew i love him more noww..thank you for sharing<3