Comments | quilled_dreams: Pedestrian Crossings - 04: Tangent. [DBSK; JaeMin; PG]

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Pedestrian Crossings - 04: Tangent. [DBSK; JaeMin; PG]

Jun 05, 2007 14:57

title: Pedestrian Crossings - 04: Tangent.
author: yumeyanafandom: dbsk ( Read more... )

couple: jaejoong x yunho, couple: jaejoong x changmin, *series: pedestrian crossings, #rps: tvxq, couple: yunho x junsu, couple: jaejoong x yoochun, couple: yoochun x junsu

Comments 9

aswindblows June 5 2007, 10:38:45 UTC

WHEE ♥

The way you're developing the characters is totally ruining any fantasy-persona one has of them, seriously. But at the same time, it's really fun and different...

I can't wait to see how much further, and to where you're gonna bring the chara development♥

yumeyana June 8 2007, 03:08:20 UTC

I'm destroying it? T.T Glad you like it, though. ♥

katzk June 5 2007, 13:12:22 UTC

I'm all caught up on this story now. Usually I don't read chaptered fics, but I decided to give this one a try and it was good enough to read all of it! It's smooth and gently flowing, I enjoyed reading.

My DBSK-mate and I have an inner joke about "everyone wants Jae." They indeed do. :D

yumeyana June 8 2007, 03:09:24 UTC

Yup, everyone wants Jae! XD I'm glad you gave me a chance. Thanks for reading~! ♥

theresa_lynne June 6 2007, 04:16:23 UTC

I have no idea where you are going with this story. Haha. It's a good story, though. I feel bad for Yunho. Left out. I mean, in the end, I want it to be JaeMin, but... I wouldn't mind JaeMinHo. :PPPP

yumeyana June 6 2007, 06:15:47 UTC

I'm going to a JaeMin confession...? Hehe. Glad you like it. ^^ Thanks for reading! ♥

kurogoma June 6 2007, 06:58:35 UTC

Just want to let you know I am really enjoying reading this. Thank you for writing it!

I love the last paragraph. Even though it doesn't seem obvious at first glance, but it seems to me that to Yoochun, his friendship with both Changmin and infatuation with Jaejoong are equally important.

I sense Yoosu, I hope so.

Though I feel sorry for Yunho, I am rooting for Jaemin all the way.

yumeyana June 8 2007, 03:10:50 UTC

Ah, yes. YooChun will be really important later on. ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying. Thanks!

anonymous June 6 2007, 08:49:07 UTC

oh please don't change the pairing.....love jaemin....there's lacking jaemin story around here...update soon...loving it.