our separate lives [tezusae; 07, 21, 25, 28]

Nov 17, 2005 22:15

title: Our Separate Lives
author: yumeyana
rating: PG-13
genre: drama, angst, sap and a little humor
themes: 07, 21, 25, 28
summary: The immune system protects the body, while vitamins strengthen it. The bones have - what was the name of those pills he saw in a commercial? - Wada Calcium CD3 to bring calcium back to them. What did their relationship have? ( Read more... )

#anime: tennis no oujisama, couple: tezuka x saeki, couple: atobe x fuji, %challenge: 30 kisses, couple: sanada x saeki, *series: until then

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aiwritingfic November 17 2005, 14:50:52 UTC
Oh, poor Tez-chan. *wibbles*

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yumeyana November 17 2005, 14:53:22 UTC

wow. you're fast... and yes, poor tezzie. i seem to like breaking tezzie apart. (^^;)

thanks for reading!

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kat8cha November 17 2005, 16:47:59 UTC
... you're *mean*... >< But a really good writer.

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yumeyana November 18 2005, 00:09:21 UTC

hehe...thanks!! ♥

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jgal87 November 17 2005, 23:45:16 UTC
XD excellent fic XD

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yumeyana November 18 2005, 00:10:15 UTC

thank you!! ♥

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snow_meow November 18 2005, 02:02:56 UTC
Is this the end?

So sad. Poor Tezuka.

I like your style of writing. I think it's good.

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yumeyana November 19 2005, 11:13:54 UTC

Nope, it's not yet. There's still a few more chapters to go.

Thanks!! ♥

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roylover November 19 2005, 01:24:32 UTC
Aw, poor Tezuka. >.< I knew Saeki was going to be the evil one! >:O (I mean, I love Saeki, but...) There was just so many clues in the story that showed it and made it so obvious. XD;; And Tezuka isn't a heart breaker. ^_^;

Overall, good story. ^_^ It was sad, really. (Darn, Tezuka should have slapped SAEKI! AH, Tezuka and his passive ways~!)

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yumeyana November 19 2005, 11:19:50 UTC

(I seem to know that icon...)

I wanted to let Tez slap Sae but it wouldn't be like him. Plus, it would be even more heartbreaking for Sae.

Thank you for reading!

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roylover November 20 2005, 23:37:45 UTC
Ah, yeah, the icon was made by H.Reeza. *_* She made it for me of Atobe and Saeki. <3

Yeah...Tezuka doesn't match slapping people. XD;; More heartbreaking for Saeki, indeed...He needed that deeper torture! >:O

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