our separate lives [tezusae; 07, 21, 25, 28]

[yumeyana]

title: Our Separate Lives
author: yumeyana
rating: PG-13
genre: drama, angst, sap and a little humor
themes: 07, 21, 25, 28
summary: The immune system protects the body, while vitamins strengthen it. The bones have - what was the name of those pills he saw in a commercial? - Wada Calcium CD3 to bring calcium back to them. What did their relationship have?

Comments

[aiwritingfic]

Oh, poor Tez-chan. *wibbles*

[yumeyana]

wow. you're fast... and yes, poor tezzie. i seem to like breaking tezzie apart. (^^;)

thanks for reading!

[kat8cha]

... you're *mean*... >< But a really good writer.

[yumeyana]

hehe...thanks!! ♥

[jgal87]

XD excellent fic XD

[yumeyana]

thank you!! ♥

[snow_meow]

Is this the end?

So sad. Poor Tezuka.

I like your style of writing. I think it's good.

[yumeyana]

Nope, it's not yet. There's still a few more chapters to go.

Thanks!! ♥

[roylover]

Aw, poor Tezuka. >.< I knew Saeki was going to be the evil one! >:O (I mean, I love Saeki, but...) There was just so many clues in the story that showed it and made it so obvious. XD;; And Tezuka isn't a heart breaker. ^_^;

Overall, good story. ^_^ It was sad, really. (Darn, Tezuka should have slapped SAEKI! AH, Tezuka and his passive ways~!)

[yumeyana]

(I seem to know that icon...)

I wanted to let Tez slap Sae but it wouldn't be like him. Plus, it would be even more heartbreaking for Sae.

Thank you for reading!

[roylover]

Ah, yeah, the icon was made by H.Reeza. *_* She made it for me of Atobe and Saeki. <3

Yeah...Tezuka doesn't match slapping people. XD;; More heartbreaking for Saeki, indeed...He needed that deeper torture! >:O