Comments | quietliban: Fic: Ways to Break a Girl (2/3) (PG, Millicent)

quietliban

Fic: Ways to Break a Girl (2/3) (PG, Millicent)

Jul 01, 2006 10:08

Title: Ways to Break a Girl: Method Two (2/3)
Author: quietliban
Rating: PG (language and grief)
Word Count:966 words
Disclaimer: The Harry Potter universe belongs to JK Rowling, and I am not her.
Summary: The world around Millicent is breaking.
Author's Notes: The second in a series of ficlets/scenes about Millicent.

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daphne greengrass, millicent bulstrode, slytherins, theodore nott, ways to break a girl

Comments 7

kaz814 July 1 2006, 00:40:17 UTC

Oh poor Millicent. You've really captured her heartbreaking emotions. Very, very well done.

quietliban July 3 2006, 01:22:05 UTC

Thank you!

rinsbane July 1 2006, 03:10:44 UTC

Nice. I like the repetition especially - it really adds to the grief, the way her mind blanks out and all she can think is in simple sentences. And of course any Millicent is good!

quietliban July 3 2006, 01:22:51 UTC

Yay! I'm glad the repetition worked. Thank you!

zeft July 1 2006, 05:36:22 UTC

Ouch.

Can I say the pain is wonderful?

quietliban July 3 2006, 01:23:54 UTC

Yes. Yes you can say pain is wonderful...um...

::shifty look::

Thank you!

seaislewitch July 18 2006, 04:36:08 UTC

How horrifying! Well done, though!