Comments | quietliban: HP Fanfic: Grief and Love (there is no redemption)

quietliban

HP Fanfic: Grief and Love (there is no redemption)

Nov 04, 2005 14:43

Title: Grief and Love (there is no redemption)
Author: quietliban
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: The Harry Potter universe and characters contained therein are property of JK Rowling and her associated publishers etc. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: We have entrusted our sister Pansy Parkinson to God's merciful keeping.
Characters: Vincent Crabbe ( Read more... )

gregory goyle, harry potter fandom, vincent crabbe, millicent bulstrode, pansy parkinson

Comments 6

approximedic November 4 2005, 07:32:08 UTC

Oh, this is very good. I love Crabbe's (?) quiet, calm narration and can't help but feel sorry for the lack of true emotion at the funeral, it's very cold.

And the way you've used the second person PoV is lovely.

quietliban November 4 2005, 20:47:58 UTC

Oh, thank you.

And yeah, it is Crabbe.

ladytory November 5 2005, 17:39:39 UTC

A rec for this popped up on my flist. I have to say that you have done a wonderful job. It is sterile and disengaged while viceral and real at the same time. Good job.

quietliban November 6 2005, 10:07:10 UTC

Wow. Thank you so much.

lyras December 4 2005, 17:34:55 UTC

I like the frankness of this. It's quiet but blunt, and an interesting look at the dynamics of the Slytherins. Poor Pansy! Unpopular even in death.

quietliban December 5 2005, 02:46:20 UTC

Thank you!