fic: There They Were

[quiet_ingenue]

Title: There They Were
Author: faded_facade
Characters: Elle, Sylar
Rating: PG
Challenge: #5, Kelly Clarkson - Cry
If anyone asks, I'll tell them we both just moved on
When people all stare, I'll pretend that I don't hear them talk
Whenever I see you, I'll swallow my pride and bite my tongue
Pretend I'm okay with it all, act like there's nothing wrong
Notes/

Comments

[catyuy]

I know that I say this often and to many writers.
~ I aknowledge that I am a fic whore ~
But this is perfect.

[quiet_ingenue]

As long as you acknowledge that fact yourself.

Thanks!

[superkappa]

I really liked these. It was an interesting take on the challenge (I was pretty liberal with this challenge too)

[quiet_ingenue]

Thanks! Man, I tried to think of some scenario where the challenge would work and my mind only came up with this scene. So I just went with it.

[acinogan]

i like that we get to see both sides of their internal monologues and how you've made them like two sides of the same coin.

(one teeny usage thing in the elle one: "She can't bring himself to say anything." - i think you might mean herself.)

[quiet_ingenue]

Haha, oops. Should be fixed now!

Thanks. I just find it super hard to write dialogue when the challenge is to make a story 100 words. So I rather get a little introspective when I can.

[dela26]

oh, nice take on the challenge! i enjoyed the dual point of view. well done! ;)

[quiet_ingenue]

Thank you very much! :)