Part 5

May 21, 2009 17:24

Night travel was much easier on the humans as was the few hours rest. Their pace had noticeably quickened and Rodney’s complaining had only to do with getting sand in his shoes. Todd led them, a few paces ahead of the group and Helena had taken up the rear. The latter, Jennifer was grateful for when she tripped over a half buried lizard like ( Read more... )

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jansma May 22 2009, 09:22:29 UTC
It was my pleasure... :)

Pleased to see it here at last, but I'm still going with my initial reaction of Rodney saying 'nipples', which is 'eewww'. Particularly in connection with Jen. *shudders* LOL

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quiet_cow May 22 2009, 12:06:04 UTC
Thanks again.
Haha. That part had been written down very early on when I got the idea after watching Brain Storm. You know, I wonder if he thinks about Sam when he's in bed with her...

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kiku65 May 22 2009, 11:24:52 UTC
"The Wraith had to listen to his dribble-"

I think you meant 'drivel'. Unless this was a deliberate way of showing Todd's misuse of human words, in which case ignore the previous :)

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quiet_cow May 22 2009, 12:09:46 UTC
Nice catch. I get that word mixed up quite a bit if I'm not paying attention.

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