Sound of Silence

Feb 04, 2006 16:51

Title: Sound of Silence
Author: quiesce
Fandom: M*A*S*H
Pairing: Hawkeye/BJ
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Sadly, I don't own M*A*S*H or any of its characters. I also don't own any Simon & Garfunkel song titles.
Word Count: 330 Words
Notes: First venture into M*A*S*H
Remixed by lordessrenegade: That I Might Reach You (The Restless Dreams Remix)

Sound of Silence )

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peg22 February 5 2006, 17:13:56 UTC
loved the fact that bj knew what Hawkeye was waking him
up for before Hawkeye told him. Sweet nice snippet. . .

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amberdowny February 6 2006, 14:24:25 UTC
Awww. I like.

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subluxate February 15 2006, 18:16:24 UTC
See, now this is good characterization. Great job. My only quibble is them sleeping in the same cot if Charles is also in the tent, given the political climate regarding homosexuality.

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quiesce February 16 2006, 03:12:32 UTC
Thanks for the comment!

In terms of Charles, I can pretend that he's away in Tokyo or on loan to the 8063rd or something...I could even modify the fic to include something to that effect. But even then, Radar (or anyone, for that matter) could easily run in if an emergency arose.

Hmm...I'll definitely need to think on a workaround before writing more M*A*S*H stuff, especially for longer stories.

I appreciate your note on the characterization and thanks for giving me something to think about :-)

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subluxate February 19 2006, 00:45:57 UTC
Glad it came across well. Good luck figuring out a way around it; I'm still having trouble with that one.

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