Influenced Dreams

[sheblehgee]

      I dream in black and white and lightning blue. Gossamer curtains billow, and the abstract scent of her skin embraces me, and her laugh is carried on the wind as I accept that I've been duped. That somehow, somewhere, I've made a mistake. That, unbeknownst to me, she knew she’d be leading this dance, and now she is. And I simply don’t know the

Comments

[mithen]

Oooh, delicious! I think you really capture the teasing quality of their relationship--and poor Eddie's constant-simmering frustration--very well. You can really feel the love he has for words, the way he weaves them even as he's talking about being impulsive. :)

[sheblehgee]

Much thanks! Ah. Relief.. I wasn't sure this came out well at all, but you picked up on the subtleties. :D Thank you!

[euphrosyne31407]

been duped That somehow somewhere