OhSam: "Wishbone"

Nov 22, 2012 13:58

Title: Wishbone
Wordcount: 3,469
Genre: Gen, curtain!fic, h/c, outsider POV
Characters: Dean, Sam, Jody, a surprise guest...
Rating: PG-13 (Language)
Warnings: terminal illness alert!
Spoilers: Season Seven-light

Very loosely based on the radiant kettle_o_fish's prompt over at OhSam: "Curtain!fic. Gen or wincest. Sam's hell trauma returns-- not as incapacitating as ( Read more... )

cancer, sam winchester, spn, oh sam, curtain!fic, h/c, dean winchester, jody mills, fanfiction

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tesserae_ November 22 2012, 19:11:18 UTC
Oh, this is just lovely, and so beautifully drawn...

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quickreaver November 22 2012, 19:23:29 UTC
Aw, thanks! You don't know how hard it was to publish it, non-beta'd. I'm like Dumbo with his magic feather.

Hope you're taking the holiday to relax and enjoy yourself. (And I have to express a personal, very sincere thanks to you, again, for all your help. I'll never stop being grateful. *hugs*)

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tesserae_ November 22 2012, 20:41:21 UTC
You're entirely welcome! And, seriously, there is nothing I would have changed in this - it's beautifully balanced and never once slips over the edge into melodramatic, which is what makes the characters ring sso true...

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amberdreams November 22 2012, 19:20:13 UTC
Ah I feel that is a cruel hope you introduced there a the end; though really, the angels OWE Sam a life or two, don't they? He'd better be fully juiced and raring to go, that's all!!!

I love that you wrote most o it from Jody's POV, because her bearing witness to their changed states and in her Mom voice works really well. This one probably didn't make me snivel as much as lustmordred's Sam with cancer fic but it was shorter. A slow decline always seems much worse than a blaze of glory, doesn't it?

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quickreaver November 22 2012, 19:29:16 UTC
Yeah, I fully intended it to be a heart-breaker but man, I couldn't! The story just kept shrugging off the ennui I was trying to force upon it. So I stopped fighting. It had its own way, in the end. ;)

BUT! I am going to hunt down lustmordred's cancer!fic post-haste. YUM.

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amberdreams November 22 2012, 19:35:42 UTC
quickreaver November 22 2012, 19:52:09 UTC
Thanks, bb! I won't NOT read something just because it's slashy. I just don't write the stuff myself. *settles in for a good, tearful read*

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monicawoe November 22 2012, 19:27:18 UTC
Never enough Jody POV! Well done. I really enjoyed the cat's name Festus for some reason.

Also I currently have pumpkin pie in the oven so I got to read this with the added benefit of smell-o-vision, or what have you ; )

Poor boys, but at least you've got a nice open (potentially happy) ending there.

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quickreaver November 22 2012, 19:29:56 UTC
Hee! SMELL-O-VISION! (I'm having a pumpkin ale...pie, later...)

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verucasalt123 November 22 2012, 20:37:19 UTC
Jody!!! Love her POV. And Cas...oh, Cas. The way you ended this is just perfect.

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quickreaver November 22 2012, 20:59:36 UTC
\0/! Yay! I was a little afraid Cas would feel like 'angelus ex machina' (I seem to have that going around these days) so I'm really glad it worked. :D

I love Jody too; she's my homegirl. Thanks bunches for reading!

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trishabooms November 22 2012, 21:07:31 UTC
Very nice.

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quickreaver November 22 2012, 21:21:17 UTC
Thank you!

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