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quickreaver

A bit of SPN fluffle

Mar 10, 2011 12:53

Something quick and light-hearted for a change. And because I'm jonesin' for summer. Cheers!

Title: 'Watchin' The Sun Bake' (Thank you, J. Buffett)
Summary: Quote prompt from wynefred o'er at spnquotefic (whole shebang found here.)

Prompt: 2.03 'Bloodlust'--DEAN: "So much f-d up crap happens in Florida."

Characters: Sam, Dean, Elvis
Rating: PG
Wordcount: ( Read more... )

sam winchester, supernatural, spn, fandom has claimed my soul, dean winchester, creative writing, i want summer, quickreaver is not a slacker, fanfiction

Comments 21

si_star_x March 10 2011, 18:19:38 UTC

OOOOOOKAY. Thank you for that beautiful image of shirtless Sam and Dean sunbathing and drinking beer. That was brilliantly done, I loved every word. ♥

quickreaver March 10 2011, 20:15:01 UTC

I know, right? Shirtless = goooood. :D

si_star_x March 10 2011, 20:18:10 UTC

So, so good. ♥

unikorento March 10 2011, 19:17:21 UTC

That... That was just fantastic. The way you described the heat and set up the scene? Even as someone who's never actually been to a beach like that, I could picture it perfectly. Very well done!

quickreaver March 10 2011, 20:11:06 UTC

I used to live in Florida and tend to agree with Dean! But man, is it nice to drive onto the beach. Makes it a red-neck paradise. *said with great affection!*

unikorento March 10 2011, 20:33:24 UTC

*looks out her window at the snowy slush* Yes. Driving onto the beach sounds pretty awesome. Warmth and sand! And Winchesters! A beach with Winchesters, that would be extra perfect. (They have those in Florida, right? :P)

quickreaver March 10 2011, 20:48:18 UTC

In QuickreaverLand they do! (We're expecting 2-3 inches of snow tonight. BLARG.)

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becc_j March 13 2011, 10:07:01 UTC

omg, brilliant. That was an amazing summer story, gorgeous descriptions that remind me of hot days on the beach :)

quickreaver March 13 2011, 16:42:45 UTC

I lived in Florida for a few years and that's the ONLY thing I miss about the place: the beach. Okay, the weather too. Hurricanes notwithstanding. And my kids really dug DisneyWorld. But it's weird living in a tourist area. Thanks for popping by and commenting! Are you doing some of the BigBangs this year? Love to see what you'd cook up.

becc_j March 14 2011, 09:10:43 UTC

Haven't signed up for any big bangs as I'm going overseas shortly, maybe when I come back I might look into it. You have signed up for some though?

quickreaver March 14 2011, 20:59:18 UTC

Oh, yeah...too many! Three, I think. One for art, one for fic, one for fic AND art. I went a little nutso. But hey, I reason that it's good practice for 'real' art and fiction! *cough cough* (Not to mention wunnerful guilty pleasures.)

Have fun on your trip! And maybe when you get back, you'll be well-rested and ready for some SPN fan-goodness. :D

raeve April 15 2011, 02:06:37 UTC

that was a fun read! you did a wonderful job setting up the scene and you get bonus points for using the word "peon" (it's so underused nowadays)! XD

quickreaver April 15 2011, 13:09:34 UTC

Thanks! I went back and re-read it (my first fanfic!) and boy, would I change a TON of stuff. OMG. Must write more! Practice, practice, prrrractice...

ficwriter1966 February 9 2012, 21:44:32 UTC

Oh, that was GREAT! We've all seen some..."apparitions" at the beach, some more horrifying than others!

quickreaver February 9 2012, 23:09:00 UTC

I lived in Florida for a couple of years. This is TRUTH. :D