Chapter 12--Better Off Dead

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Comments

[monicawoe]

What a cool tale!
I really enjoyed this. The visuals were glorious, the original characters were way cool (and I kinda wanted to meet Sammael, to be honest...but probably better we didn't)

Hooray!

[quickreaver]

Boy, you read like the wind! Sammael never made it to terra firma, so there's still a chance...

[monicawoe]

I do indeed ; ) Hubby always yells at me when we try to read things on a computer together because I scroll way too fast. Oh well. (Worked well for me though 'cause I finished your awesome story BEFORE the ep aired!)

[monicawoe]

I totally forgot to mention! I LOVED the auras. Dean's is bright pink LOL and Sam's - of course Sam's is grey. That was such a cool touch.

[galwithglasses]

If I could write more than a grocery list, I'd write an ode to this story. Engrossing case, amazing original characters (even a McGuffin). I really liked Sylvie and was glad she survived. Lots of great detail here with the backstory on Sam's weird paisley shirt and the summer spent at Bobby's. The salt and pepper comment at the end is perfect. The pink handcuffs and aura were a nice touch. Really good work.

[quickreaver]

That's a very kind comment, thank you! I'm really iffy about my writing. With art, you get instant feedback but with fic? Not so much! Especially not the longer ones but I wanted to challenge myself, see if I could do it. Plum wore me out!

Back to short fics and artstuff for a while. *phew!*

Thanks for taking the time to read it, truly! Means a lot to me.

[superbadgirl]

Whew, what a ride! I'm fairly sure nothing I could say would do it justice, so I'll just thank you for sharing it. What an awesome way to spend a Sunday morning...

[quickreaver]

Thank you for taking the time to read! I really appreciate it. :D

[zara_zee]

I really enjoyed this...what a gripping casefic. I was enthralled from the get go and I enjoyed your OCs a lot.

Your monsters were scary-awesome and I was so pleased when they found Sylvie (although sad about Simon!)

Thanks for sharing and yay for your first BigBang! :)

[quickreaver]

I have a loooong way to go before I get the hang of this writing thing but I'm SO glad you took the time to read it! And even had nice things to say. You so rock. :D

Thank you!

[adrenalineshots]

Such delightful little details, like *sheriff Eric Cartman* and the idea of Sam’s aura being ‘polluted’ by black squiggles, like a side effect of the demon blood or Judah Novack, the crazy ex, whose 'holy relic' ended up saving them… nice, well thought details that added sugar to an already delicious case-fic.

Well done!

[quickreaver]

Thanks SO much for taking the time to read! I know there are a ton of fics out there; the number waiting for me on my Kindle alone could take me well into 2012.

It's really cool that someone with copious fanfic experience like you would stop by to comment. I'm doubly appreciative!

[adrenalineshots]

I know, right? I seriously need to back track the entries in the gen_spn_bigbang and look for all the awesomeness that I missed.

And you're welcome :))) I had a great time reading this story!