Comments | quicheand: [gen] they might be monsters

quicheand

[gen] they might be monsters

Jan 28, 2011 01:55

they might be monsters
gen // pg-13 // 5,434 words

Summary: “The thing is, during the day, Taemin just acts like a normal teenage boy; no sign of the cold-hearted murderer Jonghyun had first met that night.”

( They stop being scared of Taemin after a while-sooner than Jonghyun expected. )

fic:shinee, fic, pairing:gen

Comments 19

a_life_defiant January 28 2011, 07:32:36 UTC

Ooh, this was really interesting. I always love a sinister!Taeminnie.

Well done bb!

quicheand January 28 2011, 15:36:32 UTC

Thank you! :)

rewindnext January 28 2011, 08:10:41 UTC

this was really, really intriguing/interesting. bittersweet in many ways, but nearly without the typical aftertaste.

i liked taemin's (not so) mysterious dealings and SHINee's reactions. & I liked that this was in Jonghyun's POV.

thank you for providing my daily shinee fix. :D

quicheand January 28 2011, 15:40:14 UTC

Thanks for reading!

Yeah, not sure why it just somehow...became Jonghyun's POV, but I'm glad you liked it, haha.

epikey January 28 2011, 11:54:03 UTC

This is awesome!
HI :D

Some parts of this gets kinda draggy, but I still think it's awesome. Because you ended with Jongkey even though it's not really Jongkey. I feel like this is incomplete though, just because.

Yeah. I love how you described their life after SHINee.

And I noticed you used 4 years instead of (I don't know) maybe 6 years or something. Just reminds me slightly of SM's 4 year curse. yeah.

:D

quicheand January 28 2011, 15:34:49 UTC

Yeah, after I posted it and went to bed, I was lying there thinking, "Crap, I should have explained that part more, and that part, and that part..." but of course it was too late. XD

I wasn't sure if I should cut it off at the end of SHINee or keep going on after that, so I'm glad you liked that I kept going. :)

4 years = random number, basically. Well, not totally random; I just really like multiples of four, but I didn't want to do eight because I wanted it to seem long enough that they got used to it but also short enough that afterwards, it felt like it was over in a flash.

epikey January 28 2011, 15:53:45 UTC

KYA! I hope you write more of this kind of...erm, single member focused stories. (I'll probably be stalking kekekekekeke)

Well, okay. LOL. I get it. I like the phrase 'a decade' a lot, so I tend to over use it when I write stuff.

I'd like to find out what happened to Taemin though, but maybe it's best to let the readers keep guessing. Isn't it more fun that way? Ke.

quicheand January 28 2011, 15:35:52 UTC

Oh, and I just noticed you friended me-I'm friending you back! :D

volatileflame January 28 2011, 13:51:32 UTC

this was really interesting. i liked it a lot : )

quicheand January 28 2011, 15:32:05 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

kantamu January 29 2011, 04:42:11 UTC

I liked it! I loved the idea, and the end was nice too. Although brrrrr the image of Taemin in the kitchen is kind of creepy ;D

quicheand January 29 2011, 19:36:16 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it. And glad the creepiness came through, haha.