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quellazaire

61. Silence Sings 1/8

Nov 05, 2008 19:26

Title: Silence Sings 1/8
Summary: Yunho finds himself whisked from a dull world into one that makes no sense; a smaller world full of a song that lures with dark, deep eyes.
Characters/Pairings: YunJae. DBSK and random others.
Genre: Fantasy/Drama/Romance.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own them. :3
AN: Please see the notes! :O This was inspired ( Read more... )

fandom:dbsk, pairing:yunho/jaejoong, !silence sings, .fanfiction

Comments 20

_happy_as_rain_ November 9 2008, 09:38:23 UTC

This was very interesting and mysterious; I love the feeling of ambiguity and hazy confusion. I also like how you change and skip different locations and past/present. It feels very natural and not confusing or abrupt at all. I also love how wrote notes + make an ost for this. It's great that you took so much time to make the overall product look so amazing. ♥ Excited to read the next chapter :D

quellazaire November 9 2008, 13:01:34 UTC

8D Howl's Moving Castle ftw

And thank you! That is exactly what I was going for so I'm really glad you pointed that out! It makes me happeh! XD ~ omg I think without notes people would be like wtf? xD

brailleun November 9 2008, 10:32:26 UTC

I think this is going to be one of my favorite fics *O*. The beginning sound really interesting.

quellazaire November 9 2008, 13:01:52 UTC

8D Really!? Omg that's so awesome! Thanks!

blankstare16 November 10 2008, 02:35:10 UTC

momogoodness. xD Why must you leave me with this. >.< Oh well, I'm gonna read ROD now. keke.

I love the imagery in this. And there's tons of metaphor. Well, that's what I find when I read it. <3 <3 love love.

furorpoeticus November 10 2008, 02:48:08 UTC

I'm evil.
And yay :D omg chapter 12 has a SURPRISE. :D
And thanks! I think it's weird... like, some of the metaphors and foiling and foreshadowing I was doing on purpose, then when I re-read the chapter after I finished the story, I was surprised to find even more. xD

ai_fantasy9 November 12 2008, 01:29:51 UTC

I haven't read any of your stories before...(i think). But this story attracted me and I love your writing and now, I'm going to read your other stories :D

quellazaire November 12 2008, 01:50:13 UTC

(>O<) lol well I only have one other story at the moment! D: But I'm working on a SHINee fanfic now too. :D ♥ Thanks so much for reading!

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quellazaire May 14 2009, 05:08:02 UTC

Wow thank you. :)