Comments | quelartistic: Long Skirt, Nice Jacket (oneshot) (challenge)

nashidesei in quelartistic

Long Skirt, Nice Jacket (oneshot) (challenge)

Jun 13, 2006 22:54

Title: Long Skirt, Nice Jacket
Fandom: Jak and Daxter
Rating: T
Pairing: Seem/Razer (Totally not kidding.)
Warnings: Non-pairing-pairing, unbeta’d.
Entry: 4/5
Word Count: 1,804 (These just keep getting longer! T_T Waaah!)
Notes: My fourth response to pip_malloy’s anti-pairing challenge. I blame this one entirely on my younger sister’s Jak X+Seem=WIN ( Read more... )

sub-fandom: combat racing, rating: t, character: razer, type: oneshot, pairing: razer/seem, character: seem, fandom: jak and daxter, challenge: anti-pairing, type: challenge

Comments 2

weiila June 18 2006, 12:45:07 UTC

And the sparks fly, politely XD

I've seen Seem's rage at the temple being made into a racing track somewhere before, and it's a great, appropriate theme. I also like that little thing about the ghosts and Razer despite everything believing in them. Stuff like that add dimension.

And the jacket comment gave me a good chuckle :)

dove_cg October 26 2012, 19:06:22 UTC

I realize this fanfic is pretty old, but I found it at random, doing a Google search, and it's fantastic! I love the little details and their interaction is realistic; they both feel very in character. At some point, I should probably hunt down and read the other entries that you wrote for the challenge. :)