Concrit - Questions - Notes Etc.

Oct 09, 2030 16:57

Let me know how I'm doing, but keep the golden rule in mind!

Thank you for your feedback~ :)

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sinandservitude November 30 2009, 10:29:56 UTC
Thank you for being my Ciel, my Cain, my friend. Thank you for listening to me when I'm hurting, for understanding when something's wrong, and for recognizing the traits in myself that I don't see sometimes, or at all. It means so much, especially when I don't always have someone like that offline-- at least when I'm online I know I have all those things in you.

I know this isn't a concrit, but I hope that from now on your HMD will be more pleasant to look at because of this.

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lotusrebel September 17 2011, 18:46:26 UTC
Hi! Just wanted to drop by to give my two cents on how you've been playing Ciel so far at Mostly Harmless. First off, I'm happy to see how you're keeping up Ciel's noble and aristocratic nature. You've got his basic characteristics down pat. Him looking down on others is actually kind of fun even though a majority of the refugees are older than him. That sense of superiority is a good way to create interesting tension and thus more interesting CR. I think playing against him with my OC shows some flaws in how I play her personality-wise and that's a good thing! It makes me re-evaluate my own character and see where I can improve with her ( ... )

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queens_guarddog September 17 2011, 23:47:21 UTC
I understand exactly what you're saying, but from Ciel's arrival point (in canon), he has been thrown into not just one new world - but two. If you recall the Circus Arc, he wasn't very polite to anyone - though he did go through the motions (thus why he is doing his work without much bitching). Yet he is still very cautious about letting people get close to him. His defensive outside is his way of keeping his own world alive in some small way.

When he meets someone new, he does not - and will not - trust them right off the bat or listen to what they have to say. The reason why he warmed to Rapunzel is because she has actively sought him out several times. She even welcomed him with a water bottle when he first arrived. Therefore he is reluctantly opening up to her a little bit ( ... )

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lotusrebel September 17 2011, 23:50:27 UTC
Ah, yes that makes complete sense! I think I understand your interpretation better now. It also helps that I know what direction you seem to be steering him in. I look forward to tagging him more then! :)

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queens_guarddog September 17 2011, 23:51:38 UTC
Likewise! ♥ :)

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