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queenmoony

The Immortal Ones: Chapter 10

Oct 13, 2009 11:23

The Immortal Ones

A/N: I apologize for the delay. Thank you so much for reading this story. I would greatly appreciate it if you took the time to leave a review.

Chapter 10

“I don’t know how you managed to talk me into this,” muttered McCoy to Jim.

“Come on, we are being recruited to join a league of super powered people! It will be like the X-men, or ( Read more... )

Comments 5

mijan October 13 2009, 18:45:41 UTC

I love that last line. It was CLASSIC Bones. "... whether you like it or not." Nice. :)

shingo_the_pest October 13 2009, 19:23:55 UTC

I liked that last line too. And also this one: “Hyperactive child, sit down and eat breakfast.”

Pike is just itching to tear McCoy and Jim apart.

ellie_pierson October 13 2009, 19:44:51 UTC

"You seem like the type of professor to make your students cry." I love these two and you write their dialog so well. Thank you for the update.

syredronning October 13 2009, 20:09:51 UTC

Yay, next part!! I was totally looking every day :)

I like it that Bones doesn't simply cave in regarding Pike, but I'd love to see them really speaking about it, and not just Pike seeing Bones as dirty old man.

Looking forward to more!

paleogymnast October 14 2009, 05:04:00 UTC

Great update!! :D Looking forward to more!! :D