Without Beauty - Elementary fic

Nov 03, 2012 12:13

Title: Without Beauty
Author: queenklu
Pairing: Sherlock/Joan...pre-slash? gen?
Fandom: Elementary
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2.8k
Summary: Cupcakes and crossdressing.
A/n: I woke up from a bad night's sleep with this fic rattling around in my cold-addled head. I'm only 95% sure it makes sense? Please let me know if there are glaring errors so I can fix them asap.  ( Read more... )

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jayj530 November 3 2012, 20:51:59 UTC
Wow this was really good! You did a great job capturing the dynamic that Holmes and Watson have on the show. And you kind of broke my heart a little because oh Sherlock, people can be such assholes. =(

On an editing note, though, in the sentence "The neckline is fairly modest, bust she can still see the edge of his shoulder tattoo peeking out." I think you mean but instead of bust.

Great job Klu. I REALLY hope you plan on writing more Elementary fic. =D

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queenklu November 3 2012, 23:17:40 UTC
Oh yay! I'm so glad you read and liked this bb! AND THANK YOU SO MUCH I fixed the typo! <33

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koulagirl666 November 4 2012, 04:57:10 UTC
Watson's voice is so pitch-perfect I could hear her in my head. Great work!

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queenklu November 4 2012, 06:20:58 UTC
THANK YOU! Oh wow, I'm so glad you think I did her justice! :DD

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omglawdork November 4 2012, 05:06:53 UTC
Oh, this is lovely. I love the relationship and how you showed the trust between them.

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queenklu November 4 2012, 06:40:20 UTC
alkdsjf THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :DD

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leupagus November 4 2012, 10:24:04 UTC
Now I want cupcakes. And also for them to make out.

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queenklu November 4 2012, 19:42:00 UTC
AGREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED. Maybe eventually a sequel? :D

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aheartfulofyou November 18 2012, 04:26:33 UTC
Can I sneak in to this conversation and say YES PLEASE on a sequel? Especially if the makeouts are as vulnerable and emotional as this fic. :D

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queenklu November 19 2012, 01:59:02 UTC
I'd love to write one! Just bogged down writing other things at the moment, but hopefully someday! :DD

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gaffsie November 4 2012, 21:16:48 UTC
This was really lovely. I really liked Joan's reaction to Sherlock's little secret.

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queenklu November 6 2012, 03:44:16 UTC
Oh wow, THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm really, really glad you enjoyed it! :DD

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