You've Got Hawaii (and all I've got is you) [NC17] Steve/Danny, part 2

[queenklu]

Comments

[imkalena]

YOU ARE THE BOMB, BB. C4 INNA BEAUTIFUL PACKAGE. A WRITING ANIMAL, EVEN BETTER THAN A CONSTIPATED BADGER.

[queenklu]

YOU ARE MY SUN, MY MOON, MY STARLIT SKY, WITHOUT YOU? I DWELL IN DARKNESS. *TACKLES*

[linnet_melody]

*snort* Points for the quote. .... Minus points for the follow-up of "It went *away?* 'I dwell in darkness without you' and it went away?!"

[queenklu]

HOW CAN I STOP THE BEATING OF MY HEART? IT POUNDS LIKE NEVER BEFORE. Out of fear? OUT OF LOVE! I can stop it--I'll kill you! DEATH NEXT TO LOVE IS A TRIVIAL THING. YOUR TOUCH IS WORTH A HUNDRED THOUSAND DEATHS.

*sunglasses* Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaahhhh

[andrealyn]

Augh, you know how there are stories and you read them and you think 'why should anyone else bother because this is perfection'. THIS. This right here, this is perfection. Your Steve is beyond wondrous and your Danny is so full of life and characterization and everything about this, everything is so seamless and flows perfectly with canon and oh my god, seriously, your talent is awe-inspiring and wonderful.

[queenklu]

Oh bb *blushes into oblivion* Thank you thank you thank you ♥

[leodragon1]

earlier: Yay! *settles down with maltesers and a can of coke*

Now: *maltesers are gone*

That was fun and funny and a wonderful Danny voice. I love that you picked scenes straight from the show that are real Steve/Danny moments. I stopped reading at a couple of points to watch that scene in question, very interactive.

Steve fleas will never stop being funny.

[queenklu]

LOL Yeah, I was pretty much powerwatching those scenes while I wrote this. Let it never be said that I don't squeeze out every drop of subtext I can find! :DD

Thank you bb!

[starshine24mc]

Jumpin' Jesus H. Christ on a pogo stick!!! You have broken me in the best way and now I have the fleas too!

This is so good and so well-woven into canon that I can't tell where their storytelling begins and yours takes over. I obviously have to rewatch these episodes because all of this DID HAPPEN!

Well done, you! Thank you so much for this!

[queenklu]

Eep, should have warned for flea contagiousness! Oh well. I think everyone should have a couple Steve fleas. ;DD

Thank you right back, bb! I'm so glad you liked it!

[the_beccaroo]

Christ, has there ever been a better Danny voice ever?

Just so good, this was such a wonderful read!

[queenklu]

Oh wow, THANK YOU! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :DDD

Oh dude, p.s. A+++ ICON. QI FOREVER *highfive*