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Without Loss of Generality [NC17] Sherlock/John

Sep 28, 2010 15:34

eta: right, i've renamed this. so if you're confused, that's why.

Title: Without Loss of Generality
Author: queenklu
Beta by: the lovely nebulia
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 5500~
Summary: There are more things in heaven and earth, and more important things than John Watson.

A/N: This is the tea!fic. \O/ The title is a mathmatical term which ( Read more... )

myfics, sherlockfics, sherlock & watson play cops & robbers, porn: it's what's for dinner, writing: i does it

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nightowl81 September 28 2010, 23:44:06 UTC

OMG! OMG! OMG!!! What a perfect timing! Thank you - I need this fic so effing much right now! Freaking slash discussions...

I'm going to read it tonight, in bed (haha!), and comment tomorrow but I already know I'm going to love it! :D

Btw - your pic! It's happening! XD

queenklu September 29 2010, 00:11:39 UTC

:D MY PIC! EEE I AM SO EXCITED! (AND SLIGHTLY TERRIFIED) BUT TERRIFIED IN A GOOD WAY?

*fingers crossed tight* I hope you like it bb! *glomps*

nightowl81 September 29 2010, 00:23:05 UTC

You should be terrified because I have no idea what I'm doing! LMAO! XDD

nightowl81 September 29 2010, 14:02:51 UTC

OH GOD... WHERE DO I START?!

This is so intense, passionate and sensual. I'm not even sure I'm able to find the right words to describe it... This fits them so well! Everything, from “I seem to have made you some tea” to “Yes, and now you’re one of us”. I love that John is always the one who discovers Sherlock - he's the one who tells him what he does is actually "quite extraordinary" and he's the one who proves him he's human after all ♥

No wait, in fact, they discover each other.

And it's amazing how protective and possessive they both get. What they have is not just their undeniable chemistry - they just fit. And it's incredible to watch, whether it's ACD's books, BBC series or a brilliant piece of fanfiction like this one :)

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nebulia September 29 2010, 01:52:02 UTC

This end is good too! In fact, better! Cause, it, like, connects back to the beginning and everything. :D

*SMEESH* You are wonderful and this is wonderful and hot and hotter every time I read it! :D :D

queenklu September 29 2010, 16:29:00 UTC

\O/ I'm so relieved you liked the new ending! It was bugging me that Sherlock had a new body to play with and was just leaving it there--i figure he's probably got a six-track mind, but only one track at a time gets his complete focus? Or something? IDK, I'M JUST GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT, AND THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH FOR THE BETA, BB! *GLOMPS*

leodragon1 September 29 2010, 10:13:16 UTC

"I seem to have made you some tea.”

I had the same reaction as John. Seem to?. I love how much that line tells you about what Sherlock's feeling. Wanted to hug him right then and there, except he wouldn't take it well, ha ha!

For some reason, I love the idea that people would have no idea how passionate he really is from the way he acts. Here, even Sherlock doesn't realise it. What a neat idea, and I want to hit that therapist.

queenklu September 30 2010, 01:29:42 UTC

Ahhh...I may have a bit of a weak spot for Sherlock doing normal people things without a clue as to why... XD I'm so glad you liked it, bb, and i'm fairly certain Mycroft has already had the therapist flogged and thrown into a Prussian prison. SO YAY \O/

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queenklu September 30 2010, 01:30:57 UTC

Oh wow, i'm so glad you think so! :D There are so many good writers in this fandom--i'm ecstatic you thought i did these boys justice! :DD

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queenklu September 30 2010, 06:24:33 UTC

:D I'm so glad you thought i did them justice! *BLUSH* And i only have one other itty bitty sherlock fic, which i'm sure you've found by now. This is such a talented fandom, i'm still a little skittish about tossing in my hat--this comment helped a great deal with that! THANK YOU! <33