Commentfic because I can't sleep!timeofnoreplyMarch 3 2010, 04:45:31 UTC
"Brad?" Ray asked, looking up at the ceiling, hands clasped behind his head on the pillow.
"What?"
"Don't 'what' me, dude, I'm asking you a question."
"You sound like my fucking mother, Ray. I hate it when you sound like my mother," Brad complained.
"Then maybe you shouldn't answer me so fuckin' rudely."
Brad responded by thwacking him in the arm as hard as possible. "Answer this, you jacked-up whiskey-tango snaggletoothed hillbilly fucknard."
"God, would you please just switch to decaf already," Ray said, completely unperturbed by the name-calling. Then again, he would have to be, considering that he normally referred to Brad as his personal Hebrew Hammer. ("That means he has a huge fucking horse cock, ribbed for my pleasure, just in case you didn't get the reference, Trombley.") "I'm serious, I wanted to ask you something, if you'll hold off on abusing me like Ike on Tina for a goddamn second."
Brad sighed, as if it physically pained him. "Fine."What's with the daddy thing?" Ray asked
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Re: Commentfic because I can't sleep!schlickyMarch 3 2010, 05:01:01 UTC
GLORIOUS! I love them. So much.
And also, this: Then again, he would have to be, considering that he normally referred to Brad as his personal Hebrew Hammer. ("That means he has a huge fucking horse cock, ribbed for my pleasure, just in case you didn't get the reference, Trombley.") This just killed me. My sister keeps giving me weird looks because I can't fucking stop laughing for the life of me. <33
Re: Commentfic because I can't sleep!timeofnoreplyMarch 4 2010, 01:00:32 UTC
<33 I'm glad you thought it was funny! I also feel the need to point out that whenever I write Brad/Ray fic, it tends to be dialogue-oriented. Stuff just happens that way. Whereas Walt/Ray tends to be more introspective. I'm just weird that way.
UH NOT THAT I AM TOTALLY WHORING OUT MY OWN FIC OR ANYTHING.
Re: Commentfic because I can't sleep!queeniegaloreMarch 3 2010, 05:32:05 UTC
Jesus, dude, this is amazing. Like, seriously HOT and not something I would have ever thought of. I think that Brad and Ray's daddy thing needs to be explored in GREAT DETAIL. *prods* With emphasis on how BIG Brad is compared to Ray. Uh. Not that that's like a THING for me or anything.
Re: Commentfic because I can't sleep!timeofnoreplyMarch 4 2010, 01:02:24 UTC
Really? You never thought of that before? Actually, my friend bureaucracy is the one who was initially like, "Brad so has a thing for being called 'daddy' in bed." And that's what we've been RPing for the past six months. And lord does it get intense. She's a fantastic Brad.
It's definitely not like a THING for me personally either, nope, no way, noooo.
I will see what I can do in terms of more fic, madame! I feel like we should do some chatting soon, if you're up for it. :-D
Oh, and I know you have to have read my fic over on colbert_person. Right? If you need links, I can provide. NOT THAT I AM WHORING MYSELF OUT OR ANYTHING.
Re: Commentfic because I can't sleep!queeniegaloreMarch 4 2010, 10:49:16 UTC
Well I'm certainly thinking of it NOW...and I need to go take a SHOWER.
But GUUUUH, so hot. And I'm not even gonna cross it out, the idea of Brad wanting to be called daddy in bed TOTALLY DOES IT FOR ME. Because it is freaking SCORCHING HOT. Like I said, you need to explore this idea IN DEPTH. Like, the first time Ray manages to stutter it out, and the look on Brad's face...
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Whore away, bb, I'll pay you in squee and guh :D I think I HAVE read your fics, actually, when I first got into the fandom and ripped through all the Brad/Ray on the internet in, like, three days. I'm going to have to go refresh my memory...
Re: Commentfic because I can't sleep!kitsunejinMarch 3 2010, 22:39:51 UTC
Kind of late, but - !!! WOW. The first part made me laugh out loud; you've got their old-married-couple vibe down perfectly. (Also HEBREW HAMMER, omg! Oh RAY. &hearts) And then the rest... well, it was a giant tease, actually, you should probably be ashamed of yourself. But it was an awesome tease! Thank-you! :)
Re: Commentfic because I can't sleep!timeofnoreplyMarch 4 2010, 01:03:07 UTC
Well jeez, I'm sorry I couldn't come up with sufficiently filthy daddy-kink porn at midnight. :-P It will happen eventually. Just use your imagination...especially when it comes to the spanking parts.
"What?"
"Don't 'what' me, dude, I'm asking you a question."
"You sound like my fucking mother, Ray. I hate it when you sound like my mother," Brad complained.
"Then maybe you shouldn't answer me so fuckin' rudely."
Brad responded by thwacking him in the arm as hard as possible. "Answer this, you jacked-up whiskey-tango snaggletoothed hillbilly fucknard."
"God, would you please just switch to decaf already," Ray said, completely unperturbed by the name-calling. Then again, he would have to be, considering that he normally referred to Brad as his personal Hebrew Hammer. ("That means he has a huge fucking horse cock, ribbed for my pleasure, just in case you didn't get the reference, Trombley.") "I'm serious, I wanted to ask you something, if you'll hold off on abusing me like Ike on Tina for a goddamn second."
Brad sighed, as if it physically pained him. "Fine."What's with the daddy thing?" Ray asked ( ... )
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And also, this: Then again, he would have to be, considering that he normally referred to Brad as his personal Hebrew Hammer. ("That means he has a huge fucking horse cock, ribbed for my pleasure, just in case you didn't get the reference, Trombley.") This just killed me. My sister keeps giving me weird looks because I can't fucking stop laughing for the life of me. <33
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UH NOT THAT I AM TOTALLY WHORING OUT MY OWN FIC OR ANYTHING.
...but um did you read any of my other fics? :-D
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It's definitely not like a THING for me personally either, nope, no way, noooo.
I will see what I can do in terms of more fic, madame! I feel like we should do some chatting soon, if you're up for it. :-D
Oh, and I know you have to have read my fic over on colbert_person. Right? If you need links, I can provide. NOT THAT I AM WHORING MYSELF OUT OR ANYTHING.
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But GUUUUH, so hot. And I'm not even gonna cross it out, the idea of Brad wanting to be called daddy in bed TOTALLY DOES IT FOR ME. Because it is freaking SCORCHING HOT. Like I said, you need to explore this idea IN DEPTH. Like, the first time Ray manages to stutter it out, and the look on Brad's face...
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Whore away, bb, I'll pay you in squee and guh :D I think I HAVE read your fics, actually, when I first got into the fandom and ripped through all the Brad/Ray on the internet in, like, three days. I'm going to have to go refresh my memory...
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